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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期五 十二月 08, 2006 11:06 am 发表主题: Sunflower Dream by (Josie Andrews ) |
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Sunflower Dream
I stood alone in a dream
my back to copper rays of light
folding behind shadowed hills
under the racing clouds of a darkening sky
behind me, forever fields of sunflowers swayed
the benevolent faces of a million sun gods
black seeds encircled with yellow petal coronas
warm, sensual life auras
calling me back from darkness
my gaze lost for too long
in the crystal ball of a divining sky
my body
a dot
on the never ending road
of another country _________________
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期五 十二月 08, 2006 11:11 am 发表主题: |
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Josie Andrews
she is a teacher. We meet every month for poetry workshop.
She always tell me how beautiful my poems are, we are kind related.
She told me not to change some words because of other people's critiques. " You have your way and it is beautiful. I can see and feel."
She won an award this year for poetry. Congrats.
Her teacher is Poet Laureate of Toronto. _________________
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 10, 2006 12:24 pm 发表主题: |
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my body
a dot
on the never ending road
of another country.
__I like the ending. _________________
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kokho[晓辉] kokho作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2006-10-25 帖子: 792 来自: Singapore
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发表于: 星期一 十二月 11, 2006 3:13 am 发表主题: |
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All the best ...
. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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