酷我-北美枫

[星子]

The poplars in my hometown
are slim shadows;
bold branches stretch into my dream.

Wind wanders here.
Maple leaves fall,
full of my hands.

They rustle quietly,
speaking of summer’s
fresh lush shade.

I fail to reply,
but lay one leaf after another
on my naked skin.
I imagine they desire the warmth.

The fall cannot stop its descent
and slides into the dark night.
I stand like a night beacon
to light up the faraway road.
I won’t believe--
we cannot reach the destination.
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[[ANNA]]

The poplars in my hometown
are slim shadows;
bold branches stretch into my dream.

Wind wanders here.
Maple leaves fall,
full of my hands.

They rustle quietly,
speaking of summer’s
fresh lush shade.

I fail to reply,
but lay one leaf after another
on my naked skin.
I imagine they desire the warmth.

The fall cannot stop its descent
and slides into the dark night.
I stand like a night beacon
to light up the faraway road.
I won’t believe--
we cannot reach the destination.
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[kokho]

----need I change "full of my hands" into "fall onto my hands"?

I think so...



I like this one more...

.
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

[[晓辉]]

----need I change "full of my hands" into "fall onto my hands"?

I think so...



I like this one more...

.
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

[星子]

谢谢ＫＯＫＨＯ．．．

revised again
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[[ANNA]]

谢谢ＫＯＫＨＯ．．．

revised again
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