酷我-北美枫

[星子]

不经意相逢在
蛛丝的网际。
你不断变更ID，
仿佛要忘记过去。
你说山那边有雨，
风从海上来，
带来咸的记忆。
你诉说过去
和过去的过去，
我依稀看到
你在看镜子里的自己。
我只是一个过客，
真的不在意，
山那边的雨季。
我一路走过，
早已习惯
没有网络的日子
和失去ID。

[[ANNA]]

不经意相逢在
蛛丝的网际。
你不断变更ID，
仿佛要忘记过去。
你说山那边有雨，
风从海上来，
带来咸的记忆。
你诉说过去
和过去的过去，
我依稀看到
你在看镜子里的自己。
我只是一个过客，
真的不在意，
山那边的雨季。
我一路走过，
早已习惯
没有网络的日子
和失去ID。

[叶雨]

构思很好，要是能多做比喻可能更加生动。

[[FFFFFF]]

构思很好，要是能多做比喻可能更加生动。

[walk_in_rain]

很很喜欢
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[[沐雨听风过]]

很很喜欢
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[walk_in_rain]

Here comes you, murmuring,
with floating memories,
in a salty smell.

From your words,
there comes the past of the past,
As it deposits into my eyes,
there models yourself in yourself.

I passed by your shadow,
without judging tears from bitter seawater.
I forward ahead,
in my true stepprints.
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[[沐雨听风过]]

Here comes you, murmuring,
with floating memories,
in a salty smell.

From your words,
there comes the past of the past,
As it deposits into my eyes,
there models yourself in yourself.

I passed by your shadow,
without judging tears from bitter seawater.
I forward ahead,
in my true stepprints.
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[肖今]

前面的表达很好哦：）
_________________
░░破茧成蝶 眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

[[King]]

前面的表达很好哦：）
_________________
░░破茧成蝶 眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

[星子]

Thanks all here.

Walk_in_rain, Since you really like to walk in the rain, here I adjust yours for you walking in the rain.... (haha)

--------
Here comes you, confiding,
with floating memories,
in a salty wind.

Rains pour down
to wash the past and past,
As they fall into my eyes,
you are only a shadow.

I wade along the river,
without tears dropping in bitter seawater.
I forward ahead,
in my lonely footprints.

--

[[ANNA]]

Thanks all here.

Walk_in_rain, Since you really like to walk in the rain, here I adjust yours for you walking in the rain.... (haha)

--------
Here comes you, confiding,
with floating memories,
in a salty wind.

Rains pour down
to wash the past and past,
As they fall into my eyes,
you are only a shadow.

I wade along the river,
without tears dropping in bitter seawater.
I forward ahead,
in my lonely footprints.

--

[walk_in_rain]

[[沐雨听风过]]

[和平岛]

无所谓中的有所谓
很凄美

[[我还没有昵称]]

无所谓中的有所谓
很凄美