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Love me OR Kill me

 
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柳青[歌者]
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五品知州
(再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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注册时间: 2005-12-20
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来自: 天津

帖子发表于: 星期一 十一月 20, 2006 11:47 am    发表主题: Love me OR Kill me 引用并回复

I have been wandering long time
Before catching
Your home and finding out
There you are

She’s out you said
But it’s eleven I said
She’ll come back
And I must go away

No, you smiled
She’s gone to the hometown
And can’t come
You cheat me again , you know

When we had our meat
Came in your son and said
You can’t be together with strange girl
When mother is not in

I looked at you
And you said
I’d go died

Then I found you standing there
With a block of flesh in your hand
It’s of a man
You said without any a mood

I’ll go now I said
And remember phone me
Or else I’ll tell the police

Then you put up your head and
Looked at me with a deep fear in your eyes
Seemed that you suddenly realized that
A lover of you
could become a witness of
your crime
And it was true that
A murder you have been

How desolately you are sitting there
Blue and deserted
Your eyes
Looked at me!

But dear how I want to comfort you
That I’ll never tell
Whatever you’ve committed
But I know that
I’ve lost your trust at once
I spoke out that words

Cold blood flowed through my body
Heart broken and have no word
I could say
But I know I am dead
Dead we both
In such a world
grey and dark

You and me
Die in such an unknown time
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
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注册时间: 2006-10-10
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来自: Sky Blue Water

帖子发表于: 星期一 十一月 20, 2006 1:17 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Hmmm... such a love is dreadful, terrifying.

引用:
With a block of flesh in your hand
It’s of a man
You said without any a mood


Brutal, oh my! goosebumps.

If that's what you are aimed at, you are successful achieving that effect.
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五品知州
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五品知州<BR>(再努力一把就是四品大员了!)


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帖子发表于: 星期二 十一月 21, 2006 3:45 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

谢谢指教!
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