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柳青[歌者] 柳青作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2005-12-20 帖子: 212 来自: 天津
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发表于: 星期一 十一月 20, 2006 11:47 am 发表主题: Love me OR Kill me |
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I have been wandering long time
Before catching
Your home and finding out
There you are
She’s out you said
But it’s eleven I said
She’ll come back
And I must go away
No, you smiled
She’s gone to the hometown
And can’t come
You cheat me again , you know
When we had our meat
Came in your son and said
You can’t be together with strange girl
When mother is not in
I looked at you
And you said
I’d go died
Then I found you standing there
With a block of flesh in your hand
It’s of a man
You said without any a mood
I’ll go now I said
And remember phone me
Or else I’ll tell the police
Then you put up your head and
Looked at me with a deep fear in your eyes
Seemed that you suddenly realized that
A lover of you
could become a witness of
your crime
And it was true that
A murder you have been
How desolately you are sitting there
Blue and deserted
Your eyes
Looked at me!
But dear how I want to comfort you
That I’ll never tell
Whatever you’ve committed
But I know that
I’ve lost your trust at once
I spoke out that words
Cold blood flowed through my body
Heart broken and have no word
I could say
But I know I am dead
Dead we both
In such a world
grey and dark
You and me
Die in such an unknown time |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期一 十一月 20, 2006 1:17 pm 发表主题: |
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Hmmm... such a love is dreadful, terrifying.
引用: | With a block of flesh in your hand
It’s of a man
You said without any a mood |
Brutal, oh my! goosebumps.
If that's what you are aimed at, you are successful achieving that effect. |
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柳青[歌者] 柳青作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2005-12-20 帖子: 212 来自: 天津
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发表于: 星期二 十一月 21, 2006 3:45 am 发表主题: |
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谢谢指教! |
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