酷我-北美枫

星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

You never know
how darkness is broken through
when crisp birdcalls arouse;

How the hue of Magnolia
unwraps a dream
when spring approaches

Upon the crowning hill,
stars gleam
and moonlight bathes
a little self
inside

非马 · 发表于: 星期二一月 10, 2006 11:37 am 发表主题: A lovely poem.

but why "sissies"? also, is "uopn" a typo?

星子 · 发表于: 星期二一月 10, 2006 11:39 am 发表主题:

谢谢非马，，，是笔误。。。
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和平岛 · 发表于: 星期二一月 10, 2006 12:55 pm 发表主题:

Over the crowning hill
stars gleam,
and moonlight bathes
a little self
inside,
a silent cocoon
listens...

星子 · 发表于: 星期二一月 10, 2006 1:02 pm 发表主题:

thanks peace... it seems better.
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skyhorse · 发表于: 星期三一月 11, 2006 2:44 pm 发表主题:

The picture of Crowning hill is beautiful
But it will be more beautiful
When the cocoon is broken through
And a butterfly flies out to the sky.

星子 · 发表于: 星期三一月 11, 2006 2:53 pm 发表主题:

朱新魁 · 发表于: 星期二一月 17, 2006 8:27 am 发表主题: