酷我-北美枫

[星子]

There must be something
upon the hill,
when crescent whispers to shadows,
trees stretch out in tiptoes,
and owls halt on the branches.

There must be something
In the breeze,
when the misty May breathes fragrance,
windows half opened,
sunrays shed their golden patterns.

There must be something
On the beach,
when sunset kisses the skyline,
waves twist with bubbles,
and sand embraces our footprints.

There must be something
beneath the snow,
when white quiescence dominates mountains,
squirrels clutch pinecones in their cozy home,
and I watch you from a distance.

[[ANNA]]

There must be something
upon the hill,
when crescent whispers to shadows,
trees stretch out in tiptoes,
and owls halt on the branches.

There must be something
In the breeze,
when the misty May breathes fragrance,
windows half opened,
sunrays shed their golden patterns.

There must be something
On the beach,
when sunset kisses the skyline,
waves twist with bubbles,
and sand embraces our footprints.

There must be something
beneath the snow,
when white quiescence dominates mountains,
squirrels clutch pinecones in their cozy home,
and I watch you from a distance.

[和平岛]

There must be something
in this poem
that i like so much
in a way that pushes me
far and far away

[[我还没有昵称]]

There must be something
in this poem
that i like so much
in a way that pushes me
far and far away

[walk_in_rain]

呵呵, 也有意境之分啊, 这个译的很勉强了, 做不出星子的意境出来了. 尴尬一笑.

山阴处, 桂影疏.
寒鸦啼荫香风拂.
池塘涟漪, 凭窗风迟,
踏沙两行斜日暮.
枝梢松雪未去,
寒窟暖巢已筑.
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[[沐雨听风过]]

呵呵, 也有意境之分啊, 这个译的很勉强了, 做不出星子的意境出来了. 尴尬一笑.

山阴处, 桂影疏.
寒鸦啼荫香风拂.
池塘涟漪, 凭窗风迟,
踏沙两行斜日暮.
枝梢松雪未去,
寒窟暖巢已筑.
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[晓鸣]

这首翻译得实在太勉强.原作的味道全没了.

你翻译Anna的<Friendship>时我是喝过彩的.但那首诗虽是两段,意思却很集中,适合意译.Anna这首诗不同的意象平行递进,混合就没味了.

[[自己的敌人]]

这首翻译得实在太勉强.原作的味道全没了.

你翻译Anna的<Friendship>时我是喝过彩的.但那首诗虽是两段,意思却很集中,适合意译.Anna这首诗不同的意象平行递进,混合就没味了.

[walk_in_rain]

[[沐雨听风过]]

[晓鸣]

抱歉抱歉.你和夜雨行路人都在冒雨而行,细雨濛濛,我认错人了.

你翻译的<The moment>很有味道.

喜欢你签名下的"沐雨听风 执手相对".抄首有关风和雨的对联送你,以表歉意:

水殿风来,冷香飞上诗句;
芳径雨歇,梦魂欲渡苍茫.
(梁启超集宋词联)

[[自己的敌人]]

抱歉抱歉.你和夜雨行路人都在冒雨而行,细雨濛濛,我认错人了.

你翻译的<The moment>很有味道.

喜欢你签名下的"沐雨听风 执手相对".抄首有关风和雨的对联送你,以表歉意:

水殿风来,冷香飞上诗句;
芳径雨歇,梦魂欲渡苍茫.
(梁启超集宋词联)

[星子]

Thanks all for reading.

[[ANNA]]

Thanks all for reading.