酷我-北美枫

[星子]

If meteor doesn't fall,
The wind won't trace its pace;
If moon doesn't wax,
The tide won't flux.

The moment I meet you,
as a falling star,
I cradle your light,
in my trembling shades.

If there is a promise,
I would be the wind.
We have a light-year distance,
I will use up my eternal efforts.

The mountains will witness:
Love is true.
All the tides flow
to our glowing hearts.

(This pome also In final List of a big contest)

[[ANNA]]

If meteor doesn't fall,
The wind won't trace its pace;
If moon doesn't wax,
The tide won't flux.

The moment I meet you,
as a falling star,
I cradle your light,
in my trembling shades.

If there is a promise,
I would be the wind.
We have a light-year distance,
I will use up my eternal efforts.

The mountains will witness:
Love is true.
All the tides flow
to our glowing hearts.

(This pome also In final List of a big contest)

[白水]

星光划破夜幕扑进大地的怀抱, 携着宇宙风云. 人间, 从此多了一个灼热美丽的生灵

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星光划破夜幕扑进大地的怀抱, 携着宇宙风云. 人间, 从此多了一个灼热美丽的生灵

[和平岛]

读起来很舒服的

[[我还没有昵称]]

读起来很舒服的

[星子]

我很多诗都需要修改，才能满意。这诗是没经过修改的，写完后才发现押了头韵。

谢谢大家的评论。会继续努力的。

[[ANNA]]

我很多诗都需要修改，才能满意。这诗是没经过修改的，写完后才发现押了头韵。

谢谢大家的评论。会继续努力的。

[walk_in_rain]

呵呵, 好喜欢 我来翻一翻, 大家不要笑, 呵呵.

寒月悄引归潮音,
冰风暗掩流星痕,
将缆玉影碾入怀,
扶摇轻过戏红尘.
虽只绵绵娇薄力,
未怕天涯盟誓深.
山川今日需为证.
丹心永铭情永真.
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[[沐雨听风过]]

呵呵, 好喜欢 我来翻一翻, 大家不要笑, 呵呵.

寒月悄引归潮音,
冰风暗掩流星痕,
将缆玉影碾入怀,
扶摇轻过戏红尘.
虽只绵绵娇薄力,
未怕天涯盟誓深.
山川今日需为证.
丹心永铭情永真.
_________________
沐清风以作听楼雨

[rainfayfay]

[[雨妤]]

[星子]

寒月悄引归潮音,
冰风暗掩流星痕,
将缆玉影碾入怀,
扶摇轻过戏红尘.
虽只绵绵娇薄力,
未怕天涯盟誓深.
山川今日需为证.
丹心永铭情永真.
--------Thanks for sharing----

Very good!!!! I like it...

[[ANNA]]

寒月悄引归潮音,
冰风暗掩流星痕,
将缆玉影碾入怀,
扶摇轻过戏红尘.
虽只绵绵娇薄力,
未怕天涯盟誓深.
山川今日需为证.
丹心永铭情永真.
--------Thanks for sharing----

Very good!!!! I like it...