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[anna]

Poetry by A.F. Moritz

You chose the right path in life
though as it assures you it abashes you
with crushing beauty – like these lines of Neruda
you desire the way at eleven you desire a girl.
To write just one verse like that. To know
the fruitful softness, the whispering of shadows
in light-sprinkled entrances, the female
strangeness of their male force.
As Neruda's century passed and the astonishment
his coming had aroused decayed, in you it grew.
As the dead fall away, the living is laid bare
more living. You look up from his book
and are in a world more world, and you look up
from that new world and are in his book
more book: another earth, another early home
and childhood. He shelters as he overshadows,
an older brother still a child himself.
You two are orphans, and guarding you through forests
and the eyes of crowds he reaches manhood,
and yet he's still the youth of the good promise,
alpha point of unhewn roads. You feel
abundance and the void rise alert, tender
as they watch him pass and engulf him – a love so dark
you have to long to pierce it repeatedly.


please feel free to comment or translate.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

Poetry by A.F. Moritz

You chose the right path in life
though as it assures you it abashes you
with crushing beauty – like these lines of Neruda
you desire the way at eleven you desire a girl.
To write just one verse like that. To know
the fruitful softness, the whispering of shadows
in light-sprinkled entrances, the female
strangeness of their male force.
As Neruda's century passed and the astonishment
his coming had aroused decayed, in you it grew.
As the dead fall away, the living is laid bare
more living. You look up from his book
and are in a world more world, and you look up
from that new world and are in his book
more book: another earth, another early home
and childhood. He shelters as he overshadows,
an older brother still a child himself.
You two are orphans, and guarding you through forests
and the eyes of crowds he reaches manhood,
and yet he's still the youth of the good promise,
alpha point of unhewn roads. You feel
abundance and the void rise alert, tender
as they watch him pass and engulf him – a love so dark
you have to long to pierce it repeatedly.


please feel free to comment or translate.
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[anna]

修改稿：

你选择人生正确的路途
虽然它迷醉的美宽慰你
也困惑你—— 就像你渴望聂鲁达的
诗句如同十一岁时渴望一个女孩。
谱写一首那样的诗。知悉那果实般的柔软，
光线闪烁的入口处的阴影私语，
那男性力量中的女性神秘。
聂鲁达的年代已去，他的来临唤起的惊愕
朽化了，在你这里却生长。
随着死的逝去，活着的被裸露
越发生动。从他的书你仰望，
你抵达一个更普世的世界，
从这个新世界仰望，
你抵达他的更神明的书里：
另一个地球，另一个早期的家园
和童年。一个兄长，自己也不过一个孩子，
他庇护你也让你相形见絀。
两个孤儿的你们，他引导着你穿过森林
和人群的眼睛，抵达成年，
但他仍然是美好承诺的少年，
未凿之路的起始点。
当她们温柔地看着他经过并吞没他，
内心的丰沛和空虚让你警惕——
那种漆黑深切的爱，
你不得不渴望反复地穿戳它。
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

修改稿：

你选择人生正确的路途
虽然它迷醉的美宽慰你
也困惑你—— 就像你渴望聂鲁达的
诗句如同十一岁时渴望一个女孩。
谱写一首那样的诗。知悉那果实般的柔软，
光线闪烁的入口处的阴影私语，
那男性力量中的女性神秘。
聂鲁达的年代已去，他的来临唤起的惊愕
朽化了，在你这里却生长。
随着死的逝去，活着的被裸露
越发生动。从他的书你仰望，
你抵达一个更普世的世界，
从这个新世界仰望，
你抵达他的更神明的书里：
另一个地球，另一个早期的家园
和童年。一个兄长，自己也不过一个孩子，
他庇护你也让你相形见絀。
两个孤儿的你们，他引导着你穿过森林
和人群的眼睛，抵达成年，
但他仍然是美好承诺的少年，
未凿之路的起始点。
当她们温柔地看着他经过并吞没他，
内心的丰沛和空虚让你警惕——
那种漆黑深切的爱，
你不得不渴望反复地穿戳它。
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com