酷我-北美枫

LavenderSwing · 发表于: 星期五四月 22, 2005 2:09 pm 发表主题: I only hope

I have seen the blooming stars
in a sudden splash,
I have seen how they settled
in my dream

Those winters I curled in it,
seeing snowflakes as flying lilies

Spring, Spring,
too far, and too bitter

I only hope--
never melt away
the lilies and me

白水 · 发表于: 星期五四月 22, 2005 9:05 pm 发表主题:

I just hope--
never melt away
lilies and me

和平岛 · 发表于: 星期六四月 23, 2005 12:51 am 发表主题:

有HOPE就好...

LavenderSwing · 发表于: 星期六四月 23, 2005 3:12 pm 发表主题:

Thanks,
Easter I bought a pot of lilies. now they died.

A few days ago, we local poets get together and read poems, I make new friends with two ladies. They read some sad poems. so I wrote this one.

Please move it to translation column.

LavenderSwing · 发表于: 星期六四月 23, 2005 5:28 pm 发表主题:

Thanks for my old friend (Geoff, he likes Wang Wei)

He suggested me for the last line to change to:

I only hope--
the lilies in me
never melt away