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anna[星子安娜]
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 发表于: 星期三 二月 29, 2012 1:53 pm 发表主题: 发现自己最近写不出中文诗。。。一个劲写haiku了 |
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since I submit a lot, so I cannot post...
here is a new one
rushing to my train
the sudden blizzard
a glimpse of plum blossom
---some discussions too.
James Rodriguez you bring up an interesting topic here that has been addressed with me before- 2 kigo and from different seasons. mine was: apple blossoms/ dusted with snow/ shivering- now mine obviously had many more problems than just 2 conflicting kigo ...but that was the main point, for good haiku, only one kigo and that was even covered by Michael's essay in Graceguts,up with season words, http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/up-with-season-words, i don't see a problem with it because seasons overlap but would like to see what others think on the subject. this is a rule that i don't understand.See More
about an hour ago · LikeUnlike.Anna Yin Thanks James. snow falls much like plum blossom... of course this is a glimpse the one who can make mistake...but why we make this kind of mistake... missing home... long for spring?
52 minutes ago · LikeUnlike.Anna Yin James, I believe we could use more kigo...one is reality, the other implies the mood...Like your, snow.... is the mood...or the strange weather... this kind of weird thing catches us... Nature is not always the same..
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| 发表于: 星期三 二月 29, 2012 1:54 pm 发表主题: |
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thinking of today's haiku
i draw a picture of you
smiling
sitting near me
a curry smell
comes and goes
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蔡利华[蔡利华]
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| 发表于: 星期三 二月 29, 2012 6:31 pm 发表主题: |
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你在画中
微笑
又咖喱味中来去
唉。。。。。。
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| 发表于: 星期三 二月 29, 2012 6:32 pm 发表主题: |
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嘿嘿，英语也写俳句呀。
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 01, 2012 2:43 pm 发表主题: |
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现在西方很风行。。。haiku
我的第二本诗集已被本地出版商接受出版。。。不过我想等等美国的出版商再说。。。
第三本会是一本Haiku 和摄影集锦。（那本可能会联系国内外文出版社出版）
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late night
doze off
someone else's butterfly
dressing up her dolls
my little niece
plans a tea party
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Mar 4
roadside, white wreaths
this time of year
I slow my pace
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Mar 5 multi-personalities
early spring
I doze off
someone else’s butterfly
cocoon in deep autumn
the foreign life I am in
river in zephyrs
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Mar 6
new year's eve
sizzling with firecrackers
my mother's dumplings
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Mar 7 fast
(this is for Mayor Ford)
into his fast week
he washes chubby hands
few crumbles for us
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| 发表于: 星期三 三月 07, 2012 1:52 am 发表主题: |
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| 问好，用英语写俳句，有些读不懂哟。写了不少啊 |
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| 发表于: 星期五 三月 09, 2012 2:47 pm 发表主题: |
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Mar 8
moon of wind
a frayed kite
from my childhood
Mar 9
leaves blown to me
i stop to catch
farewell alone
Mar 10
heavy rain
downtown's sky
Ford's face drops
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Mar 11 tool
up and down
on the swing
little girl catches winds
my son's eye wide open
for a drop of water
under his microscope
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# 12
awakened by
one hour forward
I miss my sweet dream
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