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 发表于: 星期一 八月 01, 2011 3:09 pm 发表主题: Visiting ZenRiver Gardens (and PurdyFest photos) |
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I just wrote this poem for our PurdyFest #5 and camping at ZenRiver Gardens as a tribute to the Host Chris Fairers and other poets...
Nice photos for ZenRiver Gardens to match the poem in Haiku Seqence.
Here is the link:
http://www.annapoetry.com/?p=1569
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| 发表于: 星期二 八月 02, 2011 8:44 am 发表主题: |
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I am glad to received Chris' email to say: Your presentation at the symposium was professional and entertaining - two things which don't always go together in a somewhat academic format....
I was invited to do more poetry presentation for other events.
And I made a lot of new friends there and I made the Great chicken wings.... (the best ever...^ ^)
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| 发表于: 星期五 八月 05, 2011 7:51 am 发表主题: |
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Comment from Penshell.
This is absolutely gorgeous, Anna. Again, it is like a series of haiku and I think you've discovered a form that truly suits your voice. It is subtle and delicate, magical in its own way. Each stanza identifies one of the group members, says something about him or establishes another detail of the setting. While this is strongly linked to personal experience, the situation has been expanded as an invitation to the reader to meet the participants and share in their gathering. So it doesn't come across as a private, "insider's moment" type of piece. You don't shut us out.
I also enjoyed seeing the photos; what a lovely spot (I'm wondering where it is located). And Chase is such a handsome dog!
Loved the part about the haiku cooling corn! I assume this means the time it took for Hans to deliver them allowed for this to happen but it's unique to think of poetry having this effect.
Really enjoyed reading this.
Brenda
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| 发表于: 星期五 八月 05, 2011 2:13 pm 发表主题: |
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I am glad that this will be published in Sept/Oct "Umbrella".
Here is the comment from the editor:
Yes, this is a powerful haiku sequence, so please use it in the next issue of "Umbrella". Anna has really captured the essences of ZenRiver Gardens and the Purdy Country LitFests.
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| 发表于: 星期一 八月 08, 2011 11:27 am 发表主题: |
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Technically, each haiku should be able to stand alone, and together as a haiku chain. The linkining thought is the zen outing.
Modern haiku has been making a change, to include more of an "inner reflection" like they have in tanka-some go for, some do not. I know the HPNC do, and emphasize that for their works, the group I attend, HPCM wavers both ways. The Virginia/DC group does like it.
As long as basic phrase/fragment structure is intact, movement towards something outside the realm of images is acceptable in many haiku nowdays. There always will be diverse responses, some positive and negative. As you write more and more haiku, you will find that you know what works for you, and that is the path you should follow.
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