酷我-北美枫

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

I read Li_young lee's poems long time ago. But I always remember this line:

Have you prayed?

Here I wrote one poem for that. In fact, my son is a very good son. I am very happy and proud to have him.

Originally, I want to write to be lucky since we never need to pray for the good life after reading lee's story, but when I began to write, I changed my voice. Embarassed

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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

博弈

Poe-tree

"When does a poem start
Father

It starts all
before it begins
and most likely for this one
it started before
you were born
before I was born
let's say
grand grand time ago

You see
a poem is like a pear
in your hand it starts
from the flower
out of its stem
trunk and root
and then the earth
where we all
e v e n t u a l l y
rest in peace

My son
so when you take a fruit
there appreciate a poem
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Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Hi Mark,

this is good and so true.

Thanks for sharing.

I may write other poems for this and let us continue...

Anna
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

星子 · 发表于: 星期五十一月 12, 2010 9:35 am 发表主题:

Don said:

A winner. The writing is strong, smooth, unworried. This is a very slick piece.

I do agree with him. This I do think is very good, so now I hide it and will submit it to some good magazine.
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