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非马[FAFAFA]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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 发表于: 星期日 十一月 01, 2009 10:30 pm 发表主题: 诗挑战 POETRY CHALLENGE |
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美国诗友维尔妲·莫雷思(Wilda Morris)是前任伊利诺州诗人协会会长,在芝加哥的诗坛上相当活跃。最近她开辟了一个叫《诗挑战》的英文网页http://wildamorris.blogspot.com/
每月初由她出题邀读者竞写,在月半前收齐后,由她及她邀请的诗人从中挑选出一两首优异的作品张贴,供人欣赏。十一月的诗题是“时装附件”（帽子、手提包、领带、皮带、皮鞋、围巾、首饰等等）,用了我的Necktie(领带)作为引诗:
NECKTIE
Before the mirror
he carefully makes himself
a tight knot
to let the hairy hand
of civilization
drag him
on
下面是这首诗的中文版:
<领带>
在镜前
精心为自己
打一个
牢牢的圈套
乖乖
让文明多毛的手
牵著脖子走 |
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期一 十一月 02, 2009 9:49 am 发表主题: |
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Thanks 非马.
submit one of mine: shoes.
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《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期一 十一月 02, 2009 11:57 am 发表主题: |
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Wilda Morris's great blog. she has lots of good stuff there.
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《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
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非马[FFFFFF]
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二品总督
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| 发表于: 星期一 十一月 02, 2009 2:58 pm 发表主题: |
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| anna 写到: | | Wilda Morris's great blog. she has lots of good stuff there. |
Yes. She is a very devoted poet. |
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期一 十一月 02, 2009 3:28 pm 发表主题: |
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Tried to submit, but cannot...(No link for submission)
So I post here:
Shoes
We don't expect
their bragging equality
from mouths and noses aloft
We are used to
being put on
pace mile after mile
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Anna Yin
《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...
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| 发表于: 星期一 十一月 02, 2009 8:10 pm 发表主题: |
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| anna 写到: | Tried to submit, but cannot...(No link for submission)
So I post here:
Shoes
We don't expect
their bragging equality
from mouths and noses aloft
We are used to
being put on
pace mile after mile |
Hi, Anna,
You can send your poem directly to [email protected]
BTW, I think it might sound better to move the word "pace" to the line above. |
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Thanks 非马.
Yes. I will try. Thanks for suggestions.
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| 发表于: 星期一 十一月 16, 2009 10:50 pm 发表主题: |
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revised
Shoes
We do not expect
humans’ bragging equality,
their mouths and noses aloft
We are used to
being put on, down to earth
pacing mile after mile
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《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
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连南河[FAFAFA]
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to let the hairy hand
of civilization
drag him
on
HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
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