酷我-北美枫

[anna]

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2009/10


meet the judge

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/judges/majid-naficy


Thank Emusing for nominating my poem for this contest.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/2009/10


meet the judge

http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/judges/majid-naficy


Thank Emusing for nominating my poem for this contest.
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[anna]

Judger's comments

Rain

by Anna Yin
Pen Shells


You don’t pray for rain in mountains.
It comes and goes as if to home.
The soil is forever soft to preserve its depth.
Leaves unfold themselves to hold each drop.
Sometimes rain wanders in clouds,
others it runs into rising streams.
At the end of each cycle, you always hear it singing
all the way home, kissing leaves, tapping trees.
Still, some drops stay longer on the tall branches
until the sky clears.
All of a sudden, a wind blows,
they let go -
A light shower surprises you
sitting motionless
under a phoenix tree.



When I read this poem, I immediately knew that it would be my first choice. That's how beauty prevails itself. The poem begins with a strong statement that rain frequents the mountain as if the mountain is its home, and ends with an unexpected experience caused by the rain. --Majid Naficy
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

Judger's comments

Rain

by Anna Yin
Pen Shells


You don’t pray for rain in mountains.
It comes and goes as if to home.
The soil is forever soft to preserve its depth.
Leaves unfold themselves to hold each drop.
Sometimes rain wanders in clouds,
others it runs into rising streams.
At the end of each cycle, you always hear it singing
all the way home, kissing leaves, tapping trees.
Still, some drops stay longer on the tall branches
until the sky clears.
All of a sudden, a wind blows,
they let go -
A light shower surprises you
sitting motionless
under a phoenix tree.



When I read this poem, I immediately knew that it would be my first choice. That's how beauty prevails itself. The poem begins with a strong statement that rain frequents the mountain as if the mountain is its home, and ends with an unexpected experience caused by the rain. --Majid Naficy
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[anna]

这首诗是今年六月宿营时下雨写的。在此我要感谢Penshell 的Emusing提名这首，我也要感谢我心中的每个朋友，是他们让我想到和写出这首诗。我希望我们的心灵就是山，是雨的家园。谢谢！



在写诗中，我们总是想着怎么写得复杂和有技巧，


却很少想过简单的也是美丽。

这首就这样自然地流露，我没想过太多。就想着把自己的心里想说的写出来。
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

这首诗是今年六月宿营时下雨写的。在此我要感谢Penshell 的Emusing提名这首，我也要感谢我心中的每个朋友，是他们让我想到和写出这首诗。我希望我们的心灵就是山，是雨的家园。谢谢！



在写诗中，我们总是想着怎么写得复杂和有技巧，


却很少想过简单的也是美丽。

这首就这样自然地流露，我没想过太多。就想着把自己的心里想说的写出来。
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com