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First Draft of Mother Day Song

 
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帖子发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 2:02 pm    发表主题: First Draft of Mother Day Song 引用并回复

The first day I came to the world,
I was lost and cried a lot,
Mom, it was you to wel-
come me with love and warmth.

My first word I learnt was from you,
my first dance I danced was with you,
those very moments, I remember happily.
All my first experiences,
from the first tooth I grew
to the first trip I took,
you stayed beside me,
You encouraged me,
you lent me a safe and strong hand.

Mom, with you, nothing I fear.
I fear not riding on my life journey,
nor facing a new world,
Mom, with you, nothing I fear,
because I know I have your support.

with you, I grow up to know God,
who lives in your heart and guides you with love.
The world becomes peaceful and harmonious,
because Jesus led by example and shared his love.

With you, I grow up to rely on God,
who lives in my heart and pours his love.
The world becomes peaceful and harmonious,
God lives in our life and pours his love.

Mom, with you, I fear not my life,
God, with you, I fear not challenge ahead.
Here I praise Mom for my life.
Here I worship God for his love.

The world becomes peaceful and harmonious,
God lives in our heart and pours his love.
Here I praise Mom for my life.
Here I worship God for his love.
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Anna Yin

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最后进行编辑的是 anna on 星期四 三月 12, 2009 6:45 pm, 总计第 3 次编辑
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帖子发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 2:03 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

I was asked to write a song for Mother Day by my son's Piano teacher.

She wants to perform it by her students on her church.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 三月 17, 2009 9:50 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

I need to shorten this poem and make it easy to remember for the kids to sing. So I will work on the second draft.
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帖子发表于: 星期四 三月 19, 2009 10:04 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Second draft:



The first day I came to the world,
I was lost and cried a lot,
it was you who hugged me
with love and warmth.

I learnt my first word,
I took my first step,
all these first moments,
you stayed beside me,
and lent me a safe hand.

With you, I grow up to know God,
who lives in your heart.
The world becomes peaceful,
God guides you with love.

With you, I grow up to rely on God,
who lives in my heart.
The world becomes peaceful,
God pours me with love.


With you, I grow up to know God,
who lives in your heart.
The world becomes peaceful,
God guides you with love.

With you, I grow up to rely on God,
who lives in my heart.
The world becomes peaceful,
God pours me with love.
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