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dundas[dundas]
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五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
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 发表于: 星期六 二月 28, 2009 1:51 pm 发表主题: Winged Migration (revised) |
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well
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fanfan[FFFFFF]
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四品府丞
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 02, 2009 8:40 am 发表主题: |
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The theme explored in the poem reminds me of Salman Rushdie's question about the problematic nature of the concept of "home" in his famous book entitled Imaginary Homelands:
The past is a country from which we have all emigrated ...
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Don't imitate me;
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 03, 2009 8:22 am 发表主题: |
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The theme explored in the poem reminds me of Salman Rushdie's question about the problematic nature of the concept of "home" in his famous book entitled Imaginary Homelands:
The past is a country from which we have all emigrated ... |
"... but ... the writer who is out-of-country and even out-of-language may experience this loss in an intensified form ... of his being 'elsewhere'" (p 12).
The key theme of your poem is so close to a poetic portrayal of Winged Migration directed by Jacques Perrin*, an exceptional documentary on the migratory patterns of birds, shot over the course of three years on all seven continents.
The story of bird migration is the story of promise - a promise to return.
You can get access to the official site of Winged Migration at http://www.sonyclassics.com/wingedmigration/index_flash.html on which there is a visually stunning video clip about the migratory behaviour of birds.
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| 发表于: 星期五 三月 06, 2009 11:51 am 发表主题: Re: Winged Migration |
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christine[christine]
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| 发表于: 星期日 三月 08, 2009 12:58 pm 发表主题: |
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"... but ... the writer who is out-of-country and even out-of-language may experience this loss in an intensified form ... of his being 'elsewhere'" (p 12). |
Yes, I concur! The soul in exile.
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The key theme of your poem is so close to a poetic portrayal of Winged Migration directed by Jacques Perrin*, an exceptional documentary on the migratory patterns of birds, shot over the course of three years on all seven continents.
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I saw this documentary on the big silver screen. Visually stunning ! |
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浴恩福[浴恩福]
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六品通判
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 10, 2009 12:33 pm 发表主题: Re: Winged Migration |
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Might be
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dundas[dundas]
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 3:39 pm 发表主题: |
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Thanks you all for your helpful suggestions and insightful comments.
I've made some revisions to my poem accordingly.
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The theme explored in the poem reminds me of Salman Rushdie's question about the problematic nature of the concept of "home" in his famous book entitled Imaginary Homelands:
The past is a country from which we have all emigrated ... |
"... but ... the writer who is out-of-country and even out-of-language may experience this loss in an intensified form ... of his being 'elsewhere'" (p 12).
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Yes, I concur!
Thanks for your attentive reading.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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| 发表于: 星期六 三月 14, 2009 10:37 am 发表主题: Re: Winged Migration |
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Upon second reading, I think “yet” would be better than “and” in S1L4.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期四 五月 21, 2009 3:16 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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clair[clair]
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七品按察司
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| 发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 10:36 am 发表主题: Re: Winged Migration |
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Upon second reading, I think “yet” would be better than “and” in S1L4. |
Yes, I concur!
I like this idea of a "portable home" explored in your poem.
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This dark
Ceiling without a star |
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dundas[dundas]
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 30, 2009 12:34 pm 发表主题: Re: Winged Migration |
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Upon second reading, I think “yet” would be better than “and” in S1L4. |
Yes, I concur!
I like this idea of a "portable home" explored in your poem. |
Thanks for your helpful suggestion. I've edited my poem accordingly.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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