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Champagne · 发表于: 星期五二月 06, 2009 8:48 am 发表主题:

I’ve made some revisions to my haiku sequence and submitted to Word Catalyst.
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robarts · 发表于: 星期一二月 09, 2009 2:09 pm 发表主题:

Good luck with your writing.

Here is my take on Canadian winter:

eyeglasses fog up
as I enter the house--
in the freeze
I have shovelled away
the dreams of my youth
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Champagne · 发表于: 星期五二月 13, 2009 8:44 pm 发表主题:

winter sadness
surfaces
while I shovel the snow

Right?
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

Champagne · 发表于: 星期日三月 01, 2009 8:33 am 发表主题:

Thanks for your generous comments.

The Winter of My Discontent has been published in the March Issue of Word Catalyst
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

robarts · 发表于: 星期一三月 02, 2009 2:23 pm 发表主题:

Champagne · 发表于: 星期五三月 06, 2009 8:37 pm 发表主题:

clair · 发表于: 星期四三月 12, 2009 12:44 pm 发表主题:

Here is my "discontent:"

Thoughts on a wintry morning

I

Snowflakes
falling from the sky
from time to time
seem to dance
out of my sight

II

Bush fled
before the onslaught of winter
Obama must shovel
the sidewalks
of Wall Street
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This dark
Ceiling without a star

Champagne · 发表于: 星期五三月 13, 2009 2:33 pm 发表主题: