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[非马]

马庭森 (Harry Martinson, 1904─1978)

Out At Sea

Out at sea one feels a spring or a summer merely as a passing breeze.
Sometimes in the summer the drifting Florida seaweed blooms,
and on a spring evening a spoon-bill stork flies in towards Holland.

Translation, W.H. Auden


在海上

在海上你感觉春夏就如同一阵过往的风。
有时在夏天漂流的佛罗里达海草开了花，
而在一个春天的黄昏一只琵鹭飞向荷兰。

非马 译

[[FAFAFA]]

马庭森 (Harry Martinson, 1904─1978)

Out At Sea

Out at sea one feels a spring or a summer merely as a passing breeze.
Sometimes in the summer the drifting Florida seaweed blooms,
and on a spring evening a spoon-bill stork flies in towards Holland.

Translation, W.H. Auden


在海上

在海上你感觉春夏就如同一阵过往的风。
有时在夏天漂流的佛罗里达海草开了花，
而在一个春天的黄昏一只琵鹭飞向荷兰。

非马 译

[绿茶]

如风。

[[绿茶]]

如风。

[Lake]

什么意思啊，绿茶？

"如风。", 是原文如风，还是译文如风，还是你在海上的感觉如风?可能是这个了。

The poem is very soothing, serene. The long lines quite fit the mood. I think the translation captured the mood and the three lines with the same length is very pleasing to the eye.

Thanks for sharing Mr. 非马.

[[Lake]]

什么意思啊，绿茶？

"如风。", 是原文如风，还是译文如风，还是你在海上的感觉如风?可能是这个了。

The poem is very soothing, serene. The long lines quite fit the mood. I think the translation captured the mood and the three lines with the same length is very pleasing to the eye.

Thanks for sharing Mr. 非马.

[绿茶]

呃。读过之后，就有一丝风的感觉。呵呵。这样说可以吗？

[[绿茶]]

呃。读过之后，就有一丝风的感觉。呵呵。这样说可以吗？

[Lake]

[[Lake]]