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[南柯舟]

Golden autumn already to
Cicada's sound have not hidden
Season singer
long call On high tree branches
Crickets whispering，
occasionally in a low voice
Warm sunshine
Show off its brilliance
"Ao, see, ah, such a beautiful day"
"Ao, looked that the day is so warm"
To looks for a corner to sing
Autumn wind twinkling, some leaves in fall, "Sha Shasha"
That Season Singer
Some crickets
Is called as by the autumn
Poet


金秋已至
蝉声未隐
季节的歌咏者
在高枝婉转长鸣
蟋蟀们喁喁私语
暖阳，闪烁着金芒
噢，看啊，多美的黎明
噢，日子是如此的惬意温馨
找寻一个角落浅吟低唱
秋风骤起，落叶沙沙飘零
季节的歌咏者
一些蟋蟀
被称为秋之
诗人
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诗歌可能是一种唯一生活在世间的生命与精神密切交流的暗夜中的幽灵，它是存在活生生的生命的文学体裁，它的眼睛能看到你我的灵魂，并游走在你我精神、魂魄、肉体的四周。 真正的真善美是敢于裸露的，放眼苍穹看去星空，那才是真爱、真善、真美。——南柯舟

[[南柯舟]]

Golden autumn already to
Cicada's sound have not hidden
Season singer
long call On high tree branches
Crickets whispering，
occasionally in a low voice
Warm sunshine
Show off its brilliance
"Ao, see, ah, such a beautiful day"
"Ao, looked that the day is so warm"
To looks for a corner to sing
Autumn wind twinkling, some leaves in fall, "Sha Shasha"
That Season Singer
Some crickets
Is called as by the autumn
Poet


金秋已至
蝉声未隐
季节的歌咏者
在高枝婉转长鸣
蟋蟀们喁喁私语
暖阳，闪烁着金芒
噢，看啊，多美的黎明
噢，日子是如此的惬意温馨
找寻一个角落浅吟低唱
秋风骤起，落叶沙沙飘零
季节的歌咏者
一些蟋蟀
被称为秋之
诗人
_________________
诗歌可能是一种唯一生活在世间的生命与精神密切交流的暗夜中的幽灵，它是存在活生生的生命的文学体裁，它的眼睛能看到你我的灵魂，并游走在你我精神、魂魄、肉体的四周。 真正的真善美是敢于裸露的，放眼苍穹看去星空，那才是真爱、真善、真美。——南柯舟

[ericcoliu]

The Chinese version of the poem is well-written while the English one reads like a poem one gets from an online text and web page language translators.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

[[ericcoliu]]

The Chinese version of the poem is well-written while the English one reads like a poem one gets from an online text and web page language translators.
_________________
Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

[Lake]

同意Eric 的意见。

英文版需要改进。 "季节诗人" 也要走出季节。

[[Lake]]

同意Eric 的意见。

英文版需要改进。 "季节诗人" 也要走出季节。