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[Mr.A]

CROWN

In the purpose of showing my true age,
sunlight flashes at the wrinkles on my face
I'm not in rage
because I know
it’s just trying to tell me past will never change.

My shoulder is penetrated by a bullet from a silver gun
blood starts slowly showing on.
It’s not frightening finding my body gleaming with red brown
since I understand
it’s their best way to remind me of the wound.

Oh I am not the clown,
the clown who sitting on the trunk
whose feet are dangling in the front.

Please call me crown!
The brave crown who stands upon
watching his body slowly disappearing
his heart strongly beating,
beating after everything's gone.
_________________
love is a cloud of smoke
Trying to occupy space.

-Elliott

[[Mr.A]]

CROWN

In the purpose of showing my true age,
sunlight flashes at the wrinkles on my face
I'm not in rage
because I know
it’s just trying to tell me past will never change.

My shoulder is penetrated by a bullet from a silver gun
blood starts slowly showing on.
It’s not frightening finding my body gleaming with red brown
since I understand
it’s their best way to remind me of the wound.

Oh I am not the clown,
the clown who sitting on the trunk
whose feet are dangling in the front.

Please call me crown!
The brave crown who stands upon
watching his body slowly disappearing
his heart strongly beating,
beating after everything's gone.
_________________
love is a cloud of smoke
Trying to occupy space.

-Elliott

[anna]

Hi Mr. A

I am not sure what the connection between the clown and crown.

May you explain?

Thanks.

Anna
_________________
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

Hi Mr. A

I am not sure what the connection between the clown and crown.

May you explain?

Thanks.

Anna
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[Mr.A]

clown the person who knows nothing but play.
crown is the person i wanna be since he(crown) is in charge of and responsible for himeself.
_________________
love is a cloud of smoke
Trying to occupy space.

-Elliott

[[Mr.A]]

clown the person who knows nothing but play.
crown is the person i wanna be since he(crown) is in charge of and responsible for himeself.
_________________
love is a cloud of smoke
Trying to occupy space.

-Elliott

[星子]

Hi Mr.A

Sorry. These weeks I am too busy.

I got your point, I think you can polish it a little bit and add more tension inside.

Anna
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[[ANNA]]

Hi Mr.A

Sorry. These weeks I am too busy.

I got your point, I think you can polish it a little bit and add more tension inside.

Anna
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[[温暖的水獸]]

[Kelly SHIN]

My shoulder is penetrated by a bullet from a silver gun
blood starts slowly showing on.
It’s not frightening finding my body gleaming with red brown
since I understand
it’s their best way to remind me of the wound ~~~

HI MR.A
A OPPRESSIVE PERSPECTIVE OPENED OUT BEFORE US.
IT MAKES ME FRIGHTENED SOMETIMES.
I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING, BUT CAN YOU SHOW US
SOME BRIGHT AND ACTIVE ONES? THANKS!

[[Kelly SHIN]]

My shoulder is penetrated by a bullet from a silver gun
blood starts slowly showing on.
It’s not frightening finding my body gleaming with red brown
since I understand
it’s their best way to remind me of the wound ~~~

HI MR.A
A OPPRESSIVE PERSPECTIVE OPENED OUT BEFORE US.
IT MAKES ME FRIGHTENED SOMETIMES.
I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING, BUT CAN YOU SHOW US
SOME BRIGHT AND ACTIVE ONES? THANKS!

[Mr.A]

ummm..haha....I think IM SHOWING MY BRIGHT-SIDE
since this poem is about being brave and yea..like that.
=)
btw.
thanks for commenting.
_________________
love is a cloud of smoke
Trying to occupy space.

-Elliott

[[Mr.A]]

ummm..haha....I think IM SHOWING MY BRIGHT-SIDE
since this poem is about being brave and yea..like that.
=)
btw.
thanks for commenting.
_________________
love is a cloud of smoke
Trying to occupy space.

-Elliott