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dundas[dundas]
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五品知州
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 发表于: 星期二 六月 24, 2008 7:06 pm 发表主题: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among poets |
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English Garden, my reflection on the recent heated debates among fellow poets
English Garden --
A small pond where lone poets,
drunk with desire and longing,
sit alone and reflect upon themselves.
Note:
English Garden is my reflection on the recent heated debates about writing, reviewing, and translating poetry and about being an good reader of the works by other writers among fellow poets.
(please read
The NeverEnding Story posted at http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=39000 ,
Earthquake Haiku posted at http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=38331 , and
This Generation and Far and Near , http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=37902
)
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well
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dundas[dundas]
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五品知州
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| 发表于: 星期二 六月 24, 2008 7:09 pm 发表主题: |
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Share with all of my fellow poets a poem by Rumi:
From myself I am copper,
through You, friend, I am gold.
From myself I'm a stone, but
through You I am a gem!
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
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christine[christine]
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| 发表于: 星期二 六月 24, 2008 7:35 pm 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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| dundas 写到: | English Garden, my reflection on the recent heated debates among fellow poets
English Garden --
A small pond where lone poets,
drunk with desire and longing,
sit alone and reflect upon themselves.
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A thoughtfully reflective piece of writing.
Your points made through the imagery of the narcissistic, lone poet, which is the antithetical imagery to that of This was a poet, are well taken.
However, I just wonder if you learn anything from these heated debates you cited above? |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 六月 25, 2008 7:31 am 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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English Garden --
A small pond where lone poets,
drunk with desire and longing,
sit alone and reflect upon themselves.
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Another Confucian Confusion!?
I sit alone
By the lake of mind
I see your face
Beneath the water
We never get tired
Of gazing at each other
I call out to you
Silently comes an echo
I dedicate these moments
To you alone, for you
I groom myself
( My piece, A Confucian Confusion, is posted at http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=36797 )
You're really an attentive and demanding reader of these above-mentioned debates.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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Champagne[Champagne]
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| 发表于: 星期三 六月 25, 2008 4:19 pm 发表主题: |
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drunk with desire and longing,
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This line has a poetic touch of Sufism.
Sufis compare our world with a tavern, a house of drinks, which intoxicate. They say get drunk, if you like, with the drinks of the world.
| dundas 写到: | Share with all of my fellow poets a poem by Rumi:
From myself I am copper,
through You, friend, I am gold.
From myself I'm a stone, but
through You I am a gem! |
This poem, in my view, would be the perfect conclusion of "the recent heated debates among fellow poets" if they are willing to learn from one another. But, I just wonder how many of them will do so if they just "sit alone and reflect upon themselves."
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
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This poem, in my view, would be the perfect conclusion of "the recent heated debates among fellow poets" if they are willing to learn from one another. But, I just wonder how many of them will do so if they just "sit alone and reflect upon themselves." |
Yes, well said.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon.
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| 发表于: 星期三 六月 25, 2008 8:28 pm 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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| dundas 写到: |
English Garden, my reflection on the recent heated debates among fellow poets
English Garden --
A small pond where lone poets,
drunk with desire and longing,
sit alone and reflect upon themselves.
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Then, their reflections are reflected back upon themselves.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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| 发表于: 星期四 六月 26, 2008 8:39 am 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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English Garden, my reflection on the recent heated debates among fellow poets
English Garden --
A small pond where lone poets,
drunk with desire and longing,
sit alone and reflect upon themselves.
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I ask the pond where I can find
Anything else as pure and transparent.
"Only in the springs of the water of life.”
-- Chu Hsi
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dundas[dundas]
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| 发表于: 星期四 六月 26, 2008 3:10 pm 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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A thoughtfully reflective piece of writing.
Your points made through the imagery of the narcissistic, lone poet, which is the antithetical imagery to that of This was a poet, are well taken.
However, I just wonder if you learn anything from these heated debates you cited above? |
My poem is the product of my learning from "the recent heated debates among poets."
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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dundas[dundas]
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| 发表于: 星期四 六月 26, 2008 3:12 pm 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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Another Confucian Confusion!?
I sit alone
By the lake of mind
I see your face
Beneath the water
We never get tired
Of gazing at each other
I call out to you
Silently comes an echo
I dedicate these moments
To you alone, for you
I groom myself
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Correctly speaking, it's another Confucian-style reflection because
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Then, their reflections are reflected back upon themselves. |
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I ask the pond where I can find
Anything else as pure and transparent.
"Only in the springs of the water of life.”
-- Chu Hsi |
It's also my question because I'm not sure about Chu Hsi's answer.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
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浴恩福[浴恩福]
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| 发表于: 星期四 六月 26, 2008 4:39 pm 发表主题: Re: English Garden, reflection on the heated debates among p |
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| dundas 写到: |
It's also my question because I'm not sure about Chu Hsi's answer. |
Is it because our "desire and longing" will drain out "the water of life" and thus no spring will come?
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