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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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 发表于: 星期一 六月 23, 2008 10:17 am 发表主题: Just a Life, An Echo to Fanfan's Year out and Year in |
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Just a Life: Damn Loneliness, An Echo to Fanfan's Year out and Year in
Loneliness –
A clock without hands.
Life –
A constant repetition.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
最后进行编辑的是 Champagne on 星期二 六月 24, 2008 5:34 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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东西[东西]
东西作品集
八品县丞
（又一个不小心，升了！）
注册时间: 2008-06-07
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来自: East_West
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| 发表于: 星期一 六月 23, 2008 12:22 pm 发表主题: Re: Just a Life: Damn Loneliness |
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| Champagne 写到: | Just a Life: Damn Loneliness
Loneliness –
A clock without hands.
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A visually concrete short poem on a timeless kind of loneliness.
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East is East, and West is West, and never the twain shall meet. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
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注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期一 六月 23, 2008 8:41 pm 发表主题: Re: Just a Life: Damn Loneliness |
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[quote="东西
A visually concrete short poem on a timeless kind of loneliness.[/quote]
Well said.
Living in a lonely world, , one needs not to be confronted by the relentlessly pointing finger of time and its handmaidens: numbers and counting.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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fanfan[FFFFFF]
fanfan作品集
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注册时间: 2007-12-27
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期二 六月 24, 2008 4:11 pm 发表主题: Re: Just a Life: Damn Loneliness |
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Living in a lonely world, , one needs not to be confronted by the relentlessly pointing finger of time and its handmaidens: numbers and counting. |
Frozen in a dead time!
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期二 六月 24, 2008 5:36 pm 发表主题: Re: Just a Life: Damn Loneliness |
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Frozen in a dead time! |
Yes!
Loneliness is a clock
without hands and numbers
frozen in a dead time.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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clair[clair]
clair作品集
七品按察司
（我开始管这里的事儿了）
注册时间: 2008-03-13
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| 发表于: 星期四 六月 26, 2008 12:08 pm 发表主题: Re: Just a Life: Damn Loneliness |
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Loneliness is a clock
without hands and numbers
frozen in a dead time. |
My poetic response is as follows:
One hundred is a long time,
But at least it comes to end.
My loneliness is a clock without hands
Frozen in a dead time.
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Life –
A constant repetition. |
A constant repetition of what?
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This dark
Ceiling without a star |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期六 六月 28, 2008 8:21 am 发表主题: Re: Just a Life: Damn Loneliness |
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My poetic response is as follows:
One hundred is a long time,
But at least it comes to end.
My loneliness is a clock without hands
Frozen in a dead time.
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Thank you so much for your poetic response.
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Life –
A constant repetition.
A constant repetition of what? |
Banal repetition and mundane routine.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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