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[christine]

[[christine]]

[fanfan]

I like your haikus which are replete with emotionally evocative, contrasting images.

By the way, I think "A sleepless night" would be better than "A long night."
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon.

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I like your haikus which are replete with emotionally evocative, contrasting images.

By the way, I think "A sleepless night" would be better than "A long night."
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon.

[Champagne]

A spark of hope amid the debris of despair.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

[[Champagne]]

A spark of hope amid the debris of despair.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

[ericcoliu]

[[ericcoliu]]

[浴恩福]

[[浴恩福]]

[Champagne]

I think the second haiku doesn't work very well to me.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

[[Champagne]]

I think the second haiku doesn't work very well to me.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

[dundas]

[[dundas]]

[clair]

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This dark
Ceiling without a star

[[clair]]

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This dark
Ceiling without a star

[christine]

Thanks for your suggestion.

I've revised my piece, significantly.

[[christine]]

Thanks for your suggestion.

I've revised my piece, significantly.

[ericcoliu]

[[ericcoliu]]

[Champagne]

At the moment the voiceless are crying for help.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

[[Champagne]]

At the moment the voiceless are crying for help.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.

[dundas]

I like the image conveyed in this haiku.

Dusty air clouded not only ruins but also the hearts of anguished parents who were once proud of their joyful children a few hours earlier.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well

[[dundas]]

I like the image conveyed in this haiku.

Dusty air clouded not only ruins but also the hearts of anguished parents who were once proud of their joyful children a few hours earlier.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well

[浴恩福]

In my view, ericcoliu's Xiaoshi is a poetic summary of Christine's Haikus.
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報三恩、耕三大福田

[[浴恩福]]

In my view, ericcoliu's Xiaoshi is a poetic summary of Christine's Haikus.
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報三恩、耕三大福田

[christine]

[[christine]]