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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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 发表于: 星期日 五月 11, 2008 7:28 pm 发表主题: Re: Gu Cheng's Poems: This Generation and Far And Near |
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By the way, I like your poem "An Immigrant." |
Thank you! Much appreciated!
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The Xiaoshi is a kind of personal, meditative poetry for which Bing Xin and Zhong Baihua were famous in the early 20th century. |
Yes, well-said.
春水，冰心
星兒！
世人凝注着你了，
導引他們的眼光。
超出太空以外罷！
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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钓月[Fishmoon]
钓月作品集
九品县令
（一不小心，做了官儿了。）
注册时间: 2008-05-04
帖子: 28
来自: 中国江苏淮安
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| 发表于: 星期一 五月 12, 2008 10:11 am 发表主题: |
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There's another translation:
一代人
顾城
黑夜给了我黑色的眼睛
我却用它寻找光明
The Generation
By Gu Cheng
It gives me black eyes, the inky night
While I use them to seek light
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欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮
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非马[FAFAFA]
非马作品集
二品总督
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| 发表于: 星期一 五月 12, 2008 11:19 am 发表主题: |
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| 钓月 写到: | There's another translation:
一代人
顾城
黑夜给了我黑色的眼睛
我却用它寻找光明
The Generation
By Gu Cheng
It gives me black eyes, the inky night
While I use them to seek light |
Not bad. |
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
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来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期三 五月 14, 2008 12:34 am 发表主题: |
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| I'm inclined to agree with 非马's points on the title translation for the two arguments he presented above. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 8:41 am 发表主题: Re: Gu Cheng's Poems: This Generation and Far And Near |
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Far and Near
You
Look at me one moment
And at the clouds the next
I feel
You are far away while looking at me
So near while looking at the clouds
Far and Near bespeaks a paradox indicative of a troubling relationship between the speaker and the “you,” |
Yes, well-said.
This paradox holds the key to understand the significance of the poem: the psychological distance and lack of communication.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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christine[christine]
christine作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2008-02-25
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| 发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 10:31 am 发表主题: Re: Gu Cheng's Poems: This Generation and Far And Near |
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| Champagne 写到: |
This paradox holds the key to understand the significance of the poem: the psychological distance and lack of communication. |
A sharp eye and witty words.
I've revised my piece. |
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