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叶雨[FAFAFA] 叶雨作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 1:07 pm 发表主题: 有了这玩意儿,每天可以写2万首诗 |
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点下面连接就知道了,有简易版本跟专业版本。
http://www.dopoem.com/index.html
有了这玩意儿,每天可以写2万首诗。大家可以省却很多麻烦,不必之乎者也琢磨了,反正也写不出啥有内容的东西。
举个例子:
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最后进行编辑的是 叶雨 on 星期一 四月 21, 2008 8:17 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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anna[星子安娜] anna作品集 Site Admin
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 1:33 pm 发表主题: |
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前几天,还在想和谁合伙写英文小说...后来又觉得没意思,所以删了...
现抛一点,因为和你这个有关联....
– “Poetry Alive” fairytale
Chapter 1
Microsoft China: staff are getting together, they are celebrating their new software which is claimed to be the best auto-poet-maker. The time is 2020, after Post Modern Era. People are tired of materialism; they wish to return back to a world which appraises nature beauty and poetic uplifting. With these demands, poetry becomes fashion again, Just like Tang Dynaty in China and 欧洲文艺复兴, the whole world calls for great poets. Microsoft predicts the unique business opportunity, the leaders of the company decide to develop the auto-poet-maker software in advance. After five years research and developing, Now on the stage, Bill Gate is showing his most exciting software. Bill cannot help rocking! Meanwhile, poems after poems he recites, and no one ever heard these beautiful poems before. The whole world is shocked; Bill Gate is making poems, in Chinese!
Only one guy smirks behind the scene. He is watching the global show all the time as well, his name is Emike. He whispers: “Soon those are bushes! Just wait, wait to see.”
Emike just quit his job from Microsoft. All of his colleges and friends were surprised by his decision. He was the most bright and promising star in the company. Bill tried his best to persuade him from quitting. But Emike insists on his decision. Every one think Emike is crazy and feel sorry for him because of giving up such wonderful future. But nobody knows that Emike has his biggest ambition and series of plans, he sets them up all. He knows all secrets of the new Microsoft software because it is him who invents it and he knows soon he will take it over.
Two months ago, he set up a new company named “Poetry Alive”. He deliberately left a fatal defect in Microsoft software: it will only allow auto-poet-maker live three months. Emike thinks it is an excellent plan. During the three month, nobody could notice the bug and meanwhile, Microsoft will advertise it in the whole world. According to Emike, by that end of three months, the whole world will laugh at the software and Microsoft. Then it is the perfect time for him to announce his new company and new software. Emike is a careful and smart person. He believes in three months, he could find the solution for the real fatal defect of the software. But now he cannot do it alone. Now he desperately needs a helper.
Chapter 2
When Jane woke up, she found herself lying on the bed, covered by a white bed sheet. Through the dim light, Jane glanced around, the room was tiny. sparsely furnished. It seemed to be a typical hotel room.
“Where am I? Why am I here? What happened? …” Jane stared at the flower-patterned wall paper blankly, no clue except she had a huge headache.
No one else was in the room, there was only silence. Jane hated to be such a fool, not knowing anything about what happened to her; she wished to dig her memory out.... Then she caught sight of her pink purse, lying on the chair, flat as a fish. Jane suddenly remembered that her partner, Lisa had packed a plump envelop into her purse, then zipped it and handed it to her. She threw the blanket out and tried to reach her purse.
In the plump envelop, there are folded pages. Jane unfolded them, the first page only have three lines, Jane recognized them, her own poem: (a haiku)
Unwrapping a dream,
beauty inside reveals truth:
change never ceases.
Jane immediately turns to next page, more poems with signature of “Emike”.
Jane never heard of Emike, no mention his poems. With curiosity, Jane read them one by one, all in once, she loves them, so powerful and delicate, so concise and profound. She wonder what does Emike look like. On the last page, yet, no poem, only a name ID with a name “Dream Room” link. Jane never heard of that, and the ID is weird too. “live to dream” . Jane was fantisitc by the mystery, she decides to go online and find it out. _________________ ---------------------
Anna Yin
《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...
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叶雨[FAFAFA] 叶雨作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 4:16 pm 发表主题: |
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Anna,不错的小说,开头有点像Matrix,写完如何?
诗歌机当然不是什么新鲜玩意。不过一些客观数据能否得出一个令人多少有些沮丧的结论:
网络诗歌70%或更多的作品只是诗歌机的水平:空洞,制式,局限在文字游戏。如果我们写的东西就是诗歌机水平,咀嚼一些感官错位等等游戏,实在是诗歌的悲哀。内容,灵魂,哲思......我在这里不太能看到,有些可悲。
最后一周,我批诗就不留情了。内容空洞的一律大骂,各位接招。
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李拜六[里太白夜访肚子美] 李拜六作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 7:52 pm 发表主题: |
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叶雨 写到: | Anna,不错的小说,开头有点像Matrix,写完如何?
诗歌机当然不是什么新鲜玩意。不过一些客观数据能否得出一个令人多少有些沮丧的结论:
网络诗歌70%或更多的作品只是诗歌机的水平:空洞,制式,局限在文字游戏。如果我们写的东西就是诗歌机水平,咀嚼一些感官错位等等游戏,实在是诗歌的悲哀。内容,灵魂,哲思......我在这里不太能看到,有些可悲。
最后一周,我批诗就不留情了。内容空洞的一律大骂,各位接招。
-老叶 | 呵呵,能到诗歌机的水平就不错了!如今很多时候,读诗变成一种痛苦的经验了。不读,无以解心瘾;读,常为之气结。 _________________ 新人出也 |
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叶雨[FAFAFA] 叶雨作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 8:21 pm 发表主题: |
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李拜六 写到: | 呵呵,能到诗歌机的水平就不错了!如今很多时候,读诗变成一种痛苦的经验了。不读,无以解心瘾;读,常为之气结。 |
那就跟老叶一样,开骂!骂醒一些诗人最好,骂不醒我们就自己解气。
很多时候,作者写东西空洞、搬弄文字也就算了,然后跟贴的说:“最后一句要是能改一两个字味道更好”
一个没有灵魂的作品,能是这两个字改好的吗?对不负责的诗评更要骂! |
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李拜六[里太白夜访肚子美] 李拜六作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 9:33 pm 发表主题: |
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叶雨, 哈哈,哈哈,哈哈!他日对酒,当为此解气语浮一大白! _________________ 新人出也 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
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李拜六[里太白夜访肚子美] 李拜六作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期一 四月 21, 2008 9:50 pm 发表主题: |
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星子, 何不试试写诗机? _________________ 新人出也 |
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秋天的枫叶林[holly] 秋天的枫叶林作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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省劲。 _________________ 因本真而活,持生命之青色。 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
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发表于: 星期二 四月 22, 2008 8:14 am 发表主题: |
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好呀...哪天拿来机器翻译的给你们批 _________________
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叶雨[FAFAFA] 叶雨作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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星子 写到: | 好呀...哪天拿来机器翻译的给你们批 |
这样:先用机器写诗,再用机器翻译。然后我们批:“最后两个字要是改一下就更加灵动了” |
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李拜六[里太白夜访肚子美] 李拜六作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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叶雨, 呵呵,你也太CNN了!做人要厚道啊! _________________ 新人出也 |
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北溟[FAFAFA] 北溟作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
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别说,用这个软件写出来的东西看着挺象诗的。至少比很多人自己写的象。 |
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叶雨[FFFFFF] 叶雨作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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以后写诗评,就按此标准。用诗歌机输入作品的关键字,然后把原作跟诗歌机相比。要是连诗歌机都比不上,那么就叫“亚诗歌机级别”,当属劣诗。诚如楼上所言,这里70%以上的诗都是亚诗歌机级别,事实如此。 |
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黑色闪电[FAFAFA] 黑色闪电作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
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发表于: 星期二 四月 29, 2008 12:57 am 发表主题: |
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轻松,搞笑,难登大雅之堂
爱玩文字游戏者当引以为戒!
网络就是活泼,多创意
建议再发明写小说机,写剧本机,翻译机,绘画机,作曲机,口水机,制定政策机,制造绯闻机,帮助名人写博机,学术论文制作机.......
不久的将来,随着新技术的开发,大家都轻松了 _________________ 黑色闪电blog |
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