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Dumpling Feast (revised)

 
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二品总督
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帖子发表于: 星期四 四月 03, 2008 3:43 pm    发表主题: Dumpling Feast (revised) 引用并回复

Reading, Writing, and Life on the Page


Dumpling Feast


Round table of communion

Old friends sit around --

Stoic faces conceal joy.


The steaming pot waits,

Dumplings are dropped in --

Echoes of lost time.


Note

Dumpling Feast is my contextualized reading of and literary response to Tu Fu's To Wie Pa, a Retired Scholar.


To Wei Pa, a Retired Scholar by Tu Fu, Translation by Kenneth Rexroth

The lives of many men are
Shorter than the years since we have
Seen each other. Aldebaran
And Antares move as we have.
And now, what night is this? We sit
Here together in the candle
Light. How much longer will our prime
Last? Our temples are already
Grey. I visit my old friends.
Half of them have become ghosts.
Fear and sorrow choke me and burn
My bowels. I never dreamed I would
Come this way, after twenty years,
A wayfarer to your parlor.
When we parted years ago,
You were unmarried. Now you have
A row of boys and girls, who smile
And ask me about my travels.
How have I reached this time and place?
Before I can come to the end
Of and endless tale, the children
Have brought out the wine. We go
Out in the night and cut young
Onions in the rainy darkness.
We eat them with hot, steaming,
Yellow millet. You say, “It is
Sad, meeting each other again.”
We drink ten toasts rapidly from
The rhinoceros horn cups.
Ten cups, and still we are not drunk.
We still love each other as
We did when we were schoolboys.
Tomorrow morning mountain peaks
Will come between us, and with them
The endless, oblivious
Business of the world.

"Tu Fu is, in my opinion, and in the opinion of a majority of those qualified to speak, the greatest non-epic, non-dramatic poet who has survived in any language…For me his response to the human situation is the only kind of religion likely to outlast this century"

-- Kenneth Rexroth
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul


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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期四 四月 03, 2008 3:49 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

贈衛八處士, 杜甫

人生不相見, 動如參與商,
今夕復何夕? 共此燈燭光。
少壯能幾時? 鬢髮各已蒼。
訪舊半為鬼, 驚呼熱中腸。
焉知二十載, 重上君子堂。
昔別君未婚, 兒女忽成行;
怡然敬父執, 問我來何方。
問答乃未已, 驅兒羅酒漿。
夜雨剪春韭, 新炊間黃粱。
主稱會面難, 一舉累十觴;
十觴亦不醉, 感子故意長。
明日隔山岳, 世事兩茫茫。
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
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四品府丞
(封疆大吏也!)
四品府丞<BR>(封疆大吏也!)


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帖子发表于: 星期五 四月 04, 2008 2:35 pm    发表主题: Re: Dumpling Feast 引用并回复

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Dumpling Feast


Round table of communion

Old friends sit around --

Silence of new joy.


Steam pot of passion

Dumplings are dropped in --

Echoes of lost time.




Contrasts are brought out by time's passing.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
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二品总督
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二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期五 四月 04, 2008 9:41 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

I'm always amazed by those who translate Chinese poetry without knowing much of the Chinese language. How could they do that? Do they translate directly from the original Chinese text or re-translate from a translated version?

Back to Dumpling Feast, reminds me of dumpling feast in Xi An. My mouth starts watering.
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二品总督
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二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期一 四月 07, 2008 9:15 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Lake 写到:
I'm always amazed by those who translate Chinese poetry without knowing much of the Chinese language. How could they do that? Do they translate directly from the original Chinese text or re-translate from a translated version?



In the case of Kenneth Rexroth, he had never consulted the Chinese source texts but English translations of Tu Fu. I think the power and beauty of his translations lie directly in the passages which he rendered most freely and which bear little resemblance to the Chinese texts. As Rexroth scholar Steve Bradbury noticed, Rexroth used Tu Fu's poetry to express his personal anxieties about WW II and leftist society in America.
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二品总督
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二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期四 四月 10, 2008 1:53 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

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In the case of Kenneth Rexroth, he had never consulted the Chinese source texts but English translations of Tu Fu. I think the power and beauty of his translations lie directly in the passages which he rendered most freely and which bear little resemblance to the Chinese texts. As Rexroth scholar Steve Bradbury noticed, Rexroth used Tu Fu's poetry to express his personal anxieties about WW II and leftist society in America.


Interesting to know. I guess Rexroth is not the only one who "translates" this way. No wonder some people would question about the accuracy of the translation. I see what he's getting at -- to get the essence and the flavor of the Chinese poetry ( adding his own interpretation and personal experience, undoubtedly)and rewrite in English expression.

Thanks for the info.
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