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anna[星子安娜]
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 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 9:50 pm 发表主题: Gifts from Paul (Poem) |
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You paint these tiny stamps
for me, a far end friend,
open and fold many thoughts
inside
I shall frame them on my silent wall,
let the moon shed light on each
Venus and Mars
ride among your beautiful dream
note:
Today I received Paul's mail. He sent me two hand-colored prints, made as square of stamps. I wrote this to thank him.
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 10:35 pm 发表主题: Re: Gifts from Paul (Poem) |
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for me, a far end friend,
let moon shed light on each
Venus and Mars
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a far end friend or a faraway friend or a friend from afar ?
let moon shed light on each or let the moon shed light on each ?
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期六 三月 29, 2008 8:40 am 发表主题: |
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Hi Eric,
Thanks a lot.
I am not sure about " A far end", but I like the sound . . . So I used it.
I will ask others if it is ok.
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期六 三月 29, 2008 5:55 pm 发表主题: |
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For Anna
Your tender vernal verse
Gently knocks
On the dormant door
Of a resonant heart
In the brown evening
Of a late magical March
Waiting for the songs
Of fire birds and robins
In pristine scents of spring.
I drink from the well
Of your soulful words
Sharing with you
The enchanting moonlight
As Venus and Mars
Traverse the universe
Between scintillating stars.
Paul Hartal
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期六 三月 29, 2008 6:24 pm 发表主题: |
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Today in our Poetry Event, I read four poems:
and I asked if " a far end friend" is ok, they said it was fine with poetic license.
I read " Be Woman" & "Mirror" and asked their feedback. They liked both very much.
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