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星子 · 发表于: 星期二三月 18, 2008 9:08 am 发表主题: My Lover (Poem)

There is a safe garden in my dream,
there you come and go.

It doesn’t matter,
really, in our real life,
we know it is a dream.

I never, ever
try to remember your face,
which I could paint in many ways
and with many colors,
I never, ever . . .
in the real life,
we know it is a dream.

You know me, or not,
you love me, or not,
you come and go,
I dream and awaken . . .

Lover is a fancy name,
a deep sorrow,
a hanging hunger,
a matching pain,
I call you and call you,
an eternal dream . . .
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anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Comments From Penshell: Very Happy

(They always challenge me, now I need to work it on... )

Anna

I think this is still in the making. At the moment it feels somewhat lost, lacking in substance. It needs a stronger (yet gentle, perhaps wishful) voice. I understand what it's trying to tell me, but I want it to take me on a deep journey. I want to feel the yearning.

I'll check back later to see what you do with it.

Have a great day.

michael ...
When we learn to live in the moment, we truly become immortal
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ericcoliu · 发表于: 星期三三月 19, 2008 9:10 am 发表主题: Re: My Lover

nephi · 发表于: 星期三三月 19, 2008 7:00 pm 发表主题: Re: My Lover

星子 · 发表于: 星期三三月 19, 2008 8:38 pm 发表主题:

Hi Eric,

Thanks a lot,

Laterly I listened to many love songs. So it brings me this. Need more work.

Anna
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三三月 19, 2008 8:39 pm 发表主题:

Hi nephi,

I think both should work. Thanks.
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连南河 · 发表于: 星期五三月 21, 2008 8:05 pm 发表主题:

星子写到:

There is a safe garden in my dream,
there you come and go.

A warm and fragrant garden
'don't forget me'
I'm a little blue flower
Cheer!
Hormish, in Hormish Garden

星子 · 发表于: 星期六三月 22, 2008 5:26 pm 发表主题:

Today I learn "Bluegrass".

Very Happy

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连南河 · 发表于: 星期日三月 30, 2008 8:37 am 发表主题:

The Bluegrass
Should translate using the bio-technology
Should be to use a blue gene
That is cloning from
'don' t forget me'
Or 'bluegrass'

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Thanks for reading.

In fact, I heard "Bluegrass" means a kind of music or grass in good quality.

I don't where the mean you mentioned come from.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com