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五绝

多伦多大学，古银杏树怀古

雨后柠檬叶，
芭蕉五水拖。
恐龙生态带，
旺盛觅桫椤。

8:30 to 8:50am, Feb 7, 2008 Toronto

A Old Ginkgo Tree Meditating on the Past at U of T

A ginkgo tree
The same period as dinosaur
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

A lemon tree
With rain dropping on the leaves more
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

A banana tree
With laker and growing throughout lake shore
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

A fern tree
With tropical rain forest and dinosour
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

7:00 to 9:30pm, Feb 17, 2008 Toronto

[[FAFAFA]]

五绝

多伦多大学，古银杏树怀古

雨后柠檬叶，
芭蕉五水拖。
恐龙生态带，
旺盛觅桫椤。

8:30 to 8:50am, Feb 7, 2008 Toronto

A Old Ginkgo Tree Meditating on the Past at U of T

A ginkgo tree
The same period as dinosaur
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

A lemon tree
With rain dropping on the leaves more
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

A banana tree
With laker and growing throughout lake shore
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

A fern tree
With tropical rain forest and dinosour
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on the past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

7:00 to 9:30pm, Feb 17, 2008 Toronto

[hahaview]

[[hahaview]]

[Champagne]

[[Champagne]]

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hahaview 写到:

A Old Ginkgo Tree Meditating on Past at U of T

Meditating on Past or Meditating on the Past (or Meditating on Things Past)?

Repetition of the following lines

"Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw"

makes the English edition distinctly different from its counterpart -- the Chinese edition.



Hi, hahaview Ha Ha view
Thank you to read and help

"Meditatng on the past"
Better than
"Meditatng on past"
Thank you so much

About some other repetitive poem lines
That have been done distinctly difference
From its Chinese edition
I am not sure it's Ok or not
I think that English poems need
More and more rhymes and rhythms

If omitting these poem lines
That English edition
Not enough to express
Too much emotion
From author in English world of the poems

But Chinese poem edition
Should be enough to catch

From these poem lines
The author also want to try
Describing a world
That human beings unborn
Just dinosaur activating
With ginkgo, lemon, fern trees
And so on tropical rain forest
That long long ago realms
Of old-time Canada
2:45 to 3:00 Feb 19, 2008

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hahaview 写到:

A Old Ginkgo Tree Meditating on Past at U of T

Meditating on Past or Meditating on the Past (or Meditating on Things Past)?

Repetition of the following lines

"Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw"

makes the English edition distinctly different from its counterpart -- the Chinese edition.



Hi, hahaview Ha Ha view
Thank you to read and help

"Meditatng on the past"
Better than
"Meditatng on past"
Thank you so much

About some other repetitive poem lines
That have been done distinctly difference
From its Chinese edition
I am not sure it's Ok or not
I think that English poems need
More and more rhymes and rhythms

If omitting these poem lines
That English edition
Not enough to express
Too much emotion
From author in English world of the poems

But Chinese poem edition
Should be enough to catch

From these poem lines
The author also want to try
Describing a world
That human beings unborn
Just dinosaur activating
With ginkgo, lemon, fern trees
And so on tropical rain forest
That long long ago realms
Of old-time Canada
2:45 to 3:00 Feb 19, 2008

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Champagne 写到:

A ginkgo tree
The same period as dinosaur
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

Do you mean that a ginkgo tree is picturesque and reminiscent of old-time Canada?


Hi, Champagne
You are asking some very nice questions
I agree with them
That ginkgo trees should be picturesgue and reminiscent
Old-time Canada

As the first stanza of the poems
''A ginkgo tree
The same as period with dinosaur''
When I saw ginkgo tree
And thought about that
A living ginkgo tree is a sole survivor
With the fossil dinosaur in Ginkgoaceae

With these poem lines
I am watching a activating dinosaur with the ginkgo trees
They are very easy and nature to nurture
Old-time Canada

Ginkgo trees are very meaningful and special
Pituresgue and reminiscent to see and study
Botanist have found that had been fossilized ginkgo tree first
Then a living ginkgo tree have been done in China and Japan
Ginkgo tree is a living fossil plant with dinosaur
A sole surviving species, genus and family
In plant kingdom
Unfortunately all dinosaurs had been missed

When you see a lot of ginkgo trees
You can think about very naturally
That ginkgo trees ever had lived with the living dinosaurs
Before long long ago
About 75 million years ago in Canada
The human being unborn realms
Of old-time Canada

For Chinese people
When you see a lot of ginkgo trees
growing in North America
You can also think about very naturally
You must have had proud from the ginkgo trees
That all immigrante from China & Japan nowadays

[[FAFAFA]]

Champagne 写到:

A ginkgo tree
The same period as dinosaur
Looking at the ginkgo tree
Meditating on past as I saw
Oh! Old-time Canada I saw

Do you mean that a ginkgo tree is picturesque and reminiscent of old-time Canada?


Hi, Champagne
You are asking some very nice questions
I agree with them
That ginkgo trees should be picturesgue and reminiscent
Old-time Canada

As the first stanza of the poems
''A ginkgo tree
The same as period with dinosaur''
When I saw ginkgo tree
And thought about that
A living ginkgo tree is a sole survivor
With the fossil dinosaur in Ginkgoaceae

With these poem lines
I am watching a activating dinosaur with the ginkgo trees
They are very easy and nature to nurture
Old-time Canada

Ginkgo trees are very meaningful and special
Pituresgue and reminiscent to see and study
Botanist have found that had been fossilized ginkgo tree first
Then a living ginkgo tree have been done in China and Japan
Ginkgo tree is a living fossil plant with dinosaur
A sole surviving species, genus and family
In plant kingdom
Unfortunately all dinosaurs had been missed

When you see a lot of ginkgo trees
You can think about very naturally
That ginkgo trees ever had lived with the living dinosaurs
Before long long ago
About 75 million years ago in Canada
The human being unborn realms
Of old-time Canada

For Chinese people
When you see a lot of ginkgo trees
growing in North America
You can also think about very naturally
You must have had proud from the ginkgo trees
That all immigrante from China & Japan nowadays

[anna]

this is very difficult to translate.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

this is very difficult to translate.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

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anna 写到

this is very difficult to translate.


Hi, anna
Thank you for helping

We are translating a long historical river
Of the cultural geography
With the ginkgo trees at U of T
Through 75 million years on the earth

Very difficulty

We are translating a long human historical river
Of the cultural geography
With the ginkgo trees at U of T
Through the eastern civilization to the western on the earth

Very difficulty

[[FAFAFA]]

anna 写到

this is very difficult to translate.


Hi, anna
Thank you for helping

We are translating a long historical river
Of the cultural geography
With the ginkgo trees at U of T
Through 75 million years on the earth

Very difficulty

We are translating a long human historical river
Of the cultural geography
With the ginkgo trees at U of T
Through the eastern civilization to the western on the earth

Very difficulty