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hahaview[hahaview]
hahaview作品集
六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
注册时间: 2008-02-07
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 发表于: 星期日 二月 17, 2008 10:10 pm 发表主题: Nightlife (revised) |
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Nightlife co-authored with ericcoliu
Looking out the car window,
You gaze across the glittering cityscape;
Someone is watching you drive by
From a dark street corner.
Neon lights flash by your window;
Your realm is someone else’s dream.
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I came, I saw, and I conquered
最后进行编辑的是 hahaview on 星期三 十月 22, 2008 7:53 am, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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Lake[Lake]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
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来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期一 二月 18, 2008 9:15 am 发表主题: |
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| This is a resemblance of 卞之琳的 断章。 |
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hahaview[hahaview]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
注册时间: 2008-02-07
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| 发表于: 星期一 二月 18, 2008 9:25 am 发表主题: |
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Hi! Lake:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
You have such a sharp eye for my poem.
Yes, this is my tribute to 卞之琳's contribution to Chinese "New Poetry."
His 断章 focuses mainly on the juxtaposition and shifting of points of views while my Nightlife points out different social statuses resulting in different points of view.
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I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期一 二月 18, 2008 11:53 am 发表主题: |
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| Lake 写到: |
This is a resemblance of 卞之琳的 断章。
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你站在桥上看风景
看风景的人在楼上看你
明月装饰了你的窗子
你装饰了别人的梦
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Yes, this is my tribute to 卞之琳's contribution to Chinese "New Poetry."
His 断章 focuses mainly on the juxtaposition and shifting of points of views while my Nightlife points out different social statuses resulting in different points of view.
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Ha! Ha! In last stanza of his poem, hahaview makes an intextual reference, thus a tribute in his view, to 卞之琳的 断章.
In my views, in 断章, 卞之琳 reveals the transitory nature of all human perspectives without taking into consideration the socio-political context in which those perspectives are made.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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hahaview[hahaview]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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| 发表于: 星期一 二月 18, 2008 5:22 pm 发表主题: |
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In my views, in 断章, 卞之琳 reveals the transitory nature of all human perspectives without taking into consideration the socio-political context in which those perspectives are made. |
Well said.
In my view, 卞之琳's 断章 affiliates itself with Chuang Tzu's philosophy, which gives emphasis to the necessarily relative nature of all human perspectives.
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hahaview[hahaview]
hahaview作品集
六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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| 发表于: 星期五 二月 22, 2008 11:12 am 发表主题: |
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Hi! Lake:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
You have such a sharp eye for my poem.
Yes, this is my tribute to 卞之琳's contribution to Chinese "New Poetry."
His 断章 focuses mainly on the juxtaposition and shifting of points of views while my Nightlife points out different social statuses resulting in different points of view. |
I have revised my piece to focus more on the differences in characters' social statuses, which result in different points of view.
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I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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连南河[FAFAFA]
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三品按察使
（天，你是斑竹吧？）
注册时间: 2008-01-14
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| 发表于: 星期日 三月 02, 2008 10:19 pm 发表主题: |
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Hi, hahaview
Here is my nightlife in downtown Toronto
Nightlife
Looking out the car windows
You are gazing across the glittering cityscape
A girl is looking at you across a street as a stream
From a dark street corner with her cape
Neon lights are flashing by your windows
You are gazing across the glittering cityscape
Your realm is adorning someone else's dream
You are adorning a city landscape
Ha Ha view
Ha Ha view
Coviews my view |
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