酷我-北美枫

[星子]

I am going to see
a doctor
to tell him
what I think of
future.

A fish in a net,
A leaf full of wrinkles.
A sand that slips nowhere…

On the way
I meet a blind man,
he points at me and says,
“Daughter, what you need
is light.”

As a seed buried by the snow
or a pearl in the shell;
their life never fades
with glowing hope…

"Daughter, watch out,
What you don’t know
is ahead”

[[ANNA]]

I am going to see
a doctor
to tell him
what I think of
future.

A fish in a net,
A leaf full of wrinkles.
A sand that slips nowhere…

On the way
I meet a blind man,
he points at me and says,
“Daughter, what you need
is light.”

As a seed buried by the snow
or a pearl in the shell;
their life never fades
with glowing hope…

"Daughter, watch out,
What you don’t know
is ahead”

[countryroad]

I can hear the sound of this Poem.

It is a very good material for a very good English song.

[[路谣]]

I can hear the sound of this Poem.

It is a very good material for a very good English song.

[星子]

Thank you, Coutryroad....better be a folk song....

ya.ya.ya....

[[ANNA]]

Thank you, Coutryroad....better be a folk song....

ya.ya.ya....

[白水]

想听

[[FFFFFF]]

想听

[spine]

布局行文很熟练了, 个别地方韵律感需加强些.
_________________
刺

[[刺-古怪如我]]

布局行文很熟练了, 个别地方韵律感需加强些.
_________________
刺

[叶雨]

欣赏中。也看见你已经自成一格。

[[FFFFFF]]

欣赏中。也看见你已经自成一格。

[icecanadaice]

好诗,尽管读英文诗头疼,还是觉得写的好感人,有启发!

[[皇甫丽雯]]

好诗,尽管读英文诗头疼,还是觉得写的好感人,有启发!

[星子]

Thanks.

What I don't know is ahead...Begin to believe dream....
_________________

[[ANNA]]

Thanks.

What I don't know is ahead...Begin to believe dream....
_________________

[邸颖]

"As a seed buried by the snow
or a pearl in the shell;
their life never fades
with glowing hope… "

yes,it is.

good poem!

[[深谷幽兰(蓝蓝)]]

"As a seed buried by the snow
or a pearl in the shell;
their life never fades
with glowing hope… "

yes,it is.

good poem!