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fanfan[FAFAFA]
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四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
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来自: Canada
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 发表于: 星期三 一月 23, 2008 9:41 am 发表主题: E-Love co-written by ericcoliu |
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E-Love
I saw your face
emerging from the pixel bit memory.
It was the haunting face
of the electrons seeking the sparks.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon.
最后进行编辑的是 fanfan on 星期二 八月 19, 2008 10:04 am, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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星子[ANNA]
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酷我！I made it！
注册时间: 2004-06-05
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来自: Toronto
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fanfan[FAFAFA]
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注册时间: 2007-12-27
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 一月 23, 2008 7:56 pm 发表主题: |
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网恋
不经意相逢在
蛛丝的网际。
你不断变更ID，
仿佛要忘记过去。
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Thanks for sharing your poem on cyber-love.
The weave of Id and love in the internet.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 一月 23, 2008 11:16 pm 发表主题: Re: E-Love |
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A touching testimonial for online dating?
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the electronics seeking the sparks.
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A love destined to be short-circuited? Oh, e-love is a suicidally romantic thing!
By the way, electronics or electrons?
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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fanfan[FAFAFA]
fanfan作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-12-27
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期四 一月 24, 2008 4:28 pm 发表主题: Re: E-Love |
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Yes, the electrons would be better. Thanks.
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A love destined to be short-circuited? Oh, e-love is a suicidally romantic thing!
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You're funny. Maybe it's time to re-invent new literary idioms which will include the new phenomenon of "e-love."
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Don't imitate me;
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期五 一月 25, 2008 8:56 pm 发表主题: |
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E-Love
I saw your face
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It was the haunting face
of the electrons seeking the sparks.
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Stumbling in the dark VL,
I feel my heart seekin' the sparks, and prayin' for love
Love love ...Prayin' for love
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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