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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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 发表于: 星期六 九月 15, 2007 12:52 pm 发表主题: I'm Champagne |
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I'm Champagne
I'm feeling like Champagne
Experiencing bubbles of cheer within
It is not part of my soul evaporating
But rising with joy.
I don't want Champagne now
I'm Champagne
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
帖子: 1393
来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期六 九月 15, 2007 4:44 pm 发表主题: |
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Poetic and joyful homage to Robert Louis Stevenson.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期六 九月 15, 2007 5:28 pm 发表主题: |
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Yes, you have an eye for my mind.
Wine is bottled poetry -- Robert Louis Stevenson
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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星子[ANNA]
星子作品集
酷我！I made it！
注册时间: 2004-06-05
帖子: 13192
来自: Toronto
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| 发表于: 星期六 九月 15, 2007 6:57 pm 发表主题: |
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what a happy and joyful spirit.
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
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注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期六 九月 15, 2007 9:03 pm 发表主题: |
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Thanks for your reading my poem and comment.
Louis Pasteur once claimed that the flavour of wine is like delicate poetry.
I hope in the foreseeable future, through the effort and time I've invested, my poetry writing will have the flavour of Champagne.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
帖子: 1341
来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期三 九月 19, 2007 10:44 am 发表主题: Re: I'm Champagne |
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| Champagne 写到: | I'm Champagne
I'm feeling like Champagne
Experiencing bubbles of cheer within
It is not part of my soul evaporating
But rising with joy.
I don't want Champagne now
I'm Champagne
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
Hey, Champagne rocks!
Here is me:
I'm Lake
that lies
among ten thousand lakes
where clear is the water that blues the sky.
flowers, the sun,
maple leaves and limpid ice
are all but a seasonal cycle
in my eye.
I stay inland watching
four seasons rushing by
with a calm mind.
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期三 九月 19, 2007 3:28 pm 发表主题: |
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The swan sings
In sleep
On the lake of the mind
A calm mind, really?
Full moon on the lake
Swans fall for a paddle boat
Sound of Love
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
帖子: 1341
来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期三 九月 19, 2007 6:35 pm 发表主题: |
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A calm mind, really?
Full moon on the lake
Swans fall for a paddle boat
Sound of Love |
Beautiful.
Nothing is really -
It’s just a state of mind
at that very moment
excited champagne
bursts like fireworks
vanishing in the sea
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