酷我-北美枫

[星子]

The Indian Ocean was a shark,
tsunami was its black sharp teeth;
snapped the surrounding shores.

A wicked hand spun the death wheel,
tolled up to 160,000 and more.
survivors were few and fewer,
cried for any rescue and hope.

The shark now retreats and rests;
claims its victory,
and scorns:
Where was your God?

[[ANNA]]

The Indian Ocean was a shark,
tsunami was its black sharp teeth;
snapped the surrounding shores.

A wicked hand spun the death wheel,
tolled up to 160,000 and more.
survivors were few and fewer,
cried for any rescue and hope.

The shark now retreats and rests;
claims its victory,
and scorns:
Where was your God?

[风动]

支持。

[[风动]]

支持。

[和平岛]

总体很好


但这句的含意不太清楚:
Where was your God?

[[我还没有昵称]]

总体很好


但这句的含意不太清楚:
Where was your God?

[灰眼睛的灰衍]

555我的理解能力有限，认真读懂它
_________________
孤掌难鸣

[[灰衍]]

555我的理解能力有限，认真读懂它
_________________
孤掌难鸣

[叶霜]

[[小霜]]

[晓鸣]

我觉得这首诗的情绪太平静了.

[[自己的敌人]]

我觉得这首诗的情绪太平静了.

[星子]

[[ANNA]]

[灰眼睛的灰衍]

?我感觉上已经很好了
_________________
孤掌难鸣

[[灰衍]]

?我感觉上已经很好了
_________________
孤掌难鸣

[LavenderSwing]

I think to write it like this need some courage.
Since the last line it may offend someone.

But it is more powerful, with the title as "No answer".

[[我还没有昵称]]

I think to write it like this need some courage.
Since the last line it may offend someone.

But it is more powerful, with the title as "No answer".

[countryroad]

禁止写英文诗！尽管我的英文也很好。不懂

[[路谣]]

禁止写英文诗！尽管我的英文也很好。不懂