酷我-北美枫

博弈

Whip me not

Don’t go there
That part of the brain
Thyme and thyme, rosemary
Don’t go there

Currently, stay with me
This side of the body
Neurons, column, and nerves
Stay with me, currently

Guitar retarded
Sun is set
Moon’s roaming
Heart—drums

Pain is echoed, mirrored
Each release of vain
By half, go there then
Go there
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Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

星子 · 发表于: 星期三三月 21, 2007 9:20 pm 发表主题:

I like the 2, 3, 4 verses...
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老哈 · 发表于: 星期三三月 21, 2007 11:39 pm 发表主题:

Chinese English? What a concept? I love your style!
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掠过天堂刹那间的感觉

博弈 · 发表于: 星期四三月 22, 2007 1:17 am 发表主题:

谢谢

Thyme and thyme, rosemary

此处，用音喻、义喻
thyme, 时间（time), time and time, 一次又一次;

喊 rosemary 为回忆.
Don't go there

又

Scarborough Fair
P. Simon/A. Garfunkel, 1966

Are you going to Scarborough Fair?
Parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme
Remember me to one who lives there
She once was a true love of mine

Tell her to make me a cambric shirt
(On the side of a hill in the deep forest green)
Parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme
(Tracing a sparrow on snow-crested ground)
Without no seams nor needlework
(Blankets and bedclothes the child of the mountain)
Then she'll be a true love of mine
(Sleeps unaware of the clarion call)

Tell her to find me an acre of land
(On the side of a hill, a sprinkling of leaves)
Parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme
(Washes the ground with so many tears)
Between the salt water and the sea strand
(A soldier cleans and polishes a gun)
Then she'll be a true love of mine

Tell her to reap it in a sickle of leather
(War bellows, blazing in scarlet battalions)
Parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme
(Generals order their soldiers to kill)
And to gather it all in a bunch of heather
(And to fight for a cause they've long ago forgotten)
Then she'll be a true love of mine

Are you going to Scarborough Fair?
Parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme
Remember me to one who lives there
She once was a true love of mine
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Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

Lake

博弈 · 发表于: 星期日四月 29, 2007 2:26 am 发表主题:

自己戏解（也不见得正确），句尾都不用标点及用中文思考来写英文

（love me, love me not --> whip me not)

鞭笞我，不要

别去哪儿
所谓脑的那分 (?, 难分非心，非思，故用脑，part 也有分离的意思，这里没法）
一次又一次，玫瑰玛丽
别往哪儿去

现在，别失落了我
在身体的这一边
元子，躯干，神经脉络
不要失落了我，如电流般

吉他声钝塌（此段配合英文句内押声或押韵或不押的杂烩 Very Happy

）
太阳已打烊
月亮徜徉婉约
心—鼓击

痛楚回声，镜射
每一次自负徒劳的释放
一半半，那就去吧（by half, 原有等比递减的原意，但也没法儿）
去吧

三分钟书就，别太认真挑剔中文，中文解释的选字，摸个象罢了。
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Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...