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walk_in_rain[沐雨听风过] walk_in_rain作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2004-06-09 帖子: 186
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发表于: 星期一 六月 21, 2004 8:23 pm 发表主题: 这是星子的诗中最喜欢的一个 Along The Railway |
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I remember
Breezes blew while willows dangled.
We walked, far along it,
Freckles on your face blossomed.
I remember
My hands held with your hair scented,
We sang free, lost your sandal.
As I chased, you as a butterfly danced.
I remember
Our whispers tickled, yet eyes tried to hide.
Sunglasses lifted, a glimpse of blue set.
parallel lines drawn near the cross end.
I remember
I walked alone the whole summer,
and weed buried my feet.
while the railway went remote,
I dragged it to my night.
[附: 我的译文]
笄乱柳风,
浅沙留双,
犹握青丝沾寒霜,
蝶影寄残香.
睡眸私语醉惺忪,
韶华伤, 散远岗.
入帘无人路两行,
孤影忘, 自游方.
千里苍苍,
万里惶惶.
伤心人天涯,
断肠处他乡. _________________ 沐清风以作听楼雨 |
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和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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发表于: 星期一 六月 21, 2004 8:30 pm 发表主题: |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期二 六月 22, 2004 11:43 am 发表主题: |
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Thanks walk_in_rain.
In fact, he/she made a little changes to my original poem, and made it better.
This was original from my image or some movies. Walk_in_rain love it very much. I assume there is some stories behind this.
Haha... catch you!!! |
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walk_in_rain[沐雨听风过] walk_in_rain作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2004-06-09 帖子: 186
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发表于: 星期二 六月 22, 2004 5:42 pm 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | Thanks walk_in_rain.
In fact, he/she made a little changes to my original poem, and made it better.
This was original from my image or some movies. Walk_in_rain love it very much. I assume there is some stories behind this.
Haha... catch you!!! |
说得我, 呵呵, :$ _________________ 沐清风以作听楼雨 |
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