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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期一 二月 26, 2007 12:18 pm 发表主题: 眨巴,砸吧 |
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crazed ()1
…, i think something
law above
reality beyond
what is that thing
?intolerable so
(a smearing grin at the top of the tree almost and always
watching me breastfeed wounds with blood and tears)
how could a night be depressed
can even my breathing modulated not
,let alone any sound ha
definitely no think-ing lest
!he see me through
!!my brain explode
!!!that, simply stupid and dumb
i think i want to kill "cogito, ergo sum"
because—i think
she just made the move
plot()2
a stalemate or standoff
(?)des-troyed but not de-feated
the waiting at present
seems a long and winding road
at the encountering, lightening
all dark waits disappear instantly
like they never existed
“”?was not i there before now
()? a wound is nothing but a growing disappearing scar.
departure()3
, my patience plan start to look promising
, he blinks but calms himself in a snobby second
starting to move his ass
…… looking for me
as he approaches within mutual range and hesitates
using my wound as a tender bait
, hide myself beside body waiting for the moment
Then
!
A Fatal Blow
!
--Ah
!, I did it I just killed it
the scheduled interview toward Heaven()4
i added this experience to my resume
then hand it over to the furnace at feet
五.Chimney
Raven
In winter
Morning
Ray
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Roaming line
Of
Sight
Beathe through Pine unwilting leaves
Comes the wind
Needles
R a i n d r o p
S
Cry (drowned) out
To Whom
Cry
Help
Swallow
Her calling
Farewell
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The world yet in sleep
The twilight hue picks up golden
After blued green, raisin’ed dew of pre-existence
Inching on the sun
Behind the Submergent coastlines
The spore nomad
Wandering—is there a home
Wondering—is there a rainbow
A drop of ray
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Anything behind or beyond it
Is there
Any
注
"cogito, ergo sum"
我思故我在的拉丁文
destroyed but not defeated
海明威老人与海中的名句半句
long and winding road (lead me to your door)
The Beatles 的一首歌中的歌词 _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...
最后进行编辑的是 博弈 on 星期四 三月 08, 2007 11:09 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期一 二月 26, 2007 2:20 pm 发表主题: |
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被整哑巴了.....
标点符号前移, 需重找呼吸规律。
怎么觉得在读之前要先提一口气,如同弹一个琴键之前有个休止符号。
不仅是形式诡异,内容也深奥。
我一凡夫俗子..... |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期一 二月 26, 2007 3:07 pm 发表主题: |
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被整哑巴了.....
哈....我还是逃....... _________________
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bei[bei] bei作品集 举人 (中举啦,狂喜中!)
注册时间: 2007-02-20 帖子: 9
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发表于: 星期六 三月 03, 2007 9:39 pm 发表主题: …… |
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原来诗还能这样写……
英文诗也是很有意思的阿!!! |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期二 三月 06, 2007 4:00 pm 发表主题: Re: …… |
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bei 写到: | 原来诗还能这样写……
英文诗也是很有意思的阿!!! |
你刚学写英文诗,别学这个。还是先老老实实扎根为先。
来了后,还是很多人谈诗写诗的,别怕。 _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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