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ljm001[星海] ljm001作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2006-01-15 帖子: 152 来自: 大连
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发表于: 星期日 一月 14, 2007 9:26 pm 发表主题: UNDER THE TREE |
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UNDER THE TREE*
I sat under the tree,
Stretching my hands greeting thee.
My dove, my friend,
I saw my Dad waving his hand
Greeting doves flying .
In a sky so blue, a Tokyo's day**.
We lost blue creeks
We possess less green.
Home is the best,
Yet we long for a better than best.
Looking around,
Looking up and down,
The Tokyo's photo dimmed into the past,
Stripping me of the illusion gone so fast.
Hello, Dad, your son's here
Greeting doves as you did the other year
On the lawn we crave for
Under a Huntington's tree never seen before.
*The poem was written in 1993 in an American city called Huntington where for the first time I saw the Dogwood tree.
**My father visited Tokyo, Japan in 1990 and told us that the city was clean with blue sky and green lawn. _________________ 听坡上林涛低鸣,看崖下海浪拍岸 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期日 一月 14, 2007 9:41 pm 发表主题: |
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The Tokyo's photo dimmed into the past,
Stripping me of the illusion gone so fast.
On the lawn we crave for
Under a Huntington's tree never seen before.
I love those lines...
----a sad poem... touching.
Thanks for sharing. _________________
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期一 一月 15, 2007 4:27 pm 发表主题: |
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I feel a sense of longing ...
and am glad to see 'thee' again. Just kidding |
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ljm001[星海] ljm001作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2006-01-15 帖子: 152 来自: 大连
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发表于: 星期三 一月 17, 2007 6:52 pm 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | The Tokyo's photo dimmed into the past,
Stripping me of the illusion gone so fast.
On the lawn we crave for
Under a Huntington's tree never seen before.
I love those lines...
----a sad poem... touching.
Thanks for sharing. |
Thank you, XingZi, for your comment. You are right. Very sad. _________________ 听坡上林涛低鸣,看崖下海浪拍岸 |
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ljm001[星海] ljm001作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2006-01-15 帖子: 152 来自: 大连
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发表于: 星期三 一月 17, 2007 6:55 pm 发表主题: |
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Lake 写到: | I feel a sense of longing ...
and am glad to see 'thee' again. Just kidding |
Thank you, Lake. Yes we do long for a better environment in China.
Oh, "thee". Haha, your eyes. Great! Kidding D _________________ 听坡上林涛低鸣,看崖下海浪拍岸 |
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