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近日有感（自嘲评者）

What’s the poetics in your words?

Blah, blah, blah…
What’s the poetics in your words?
Coming to a gun fighter with a knife
A sharp, shining blade
Ready to kill
Blah-blah bang-bang，平平仄仄
Where’s the poetry in your hand?

Take a stake eating steaks
Stampeded the sandstorm
As you’re ready to put words in：
Where’s the beef
Bang blah-blah bang-bang，仄平平仄仄
Coming to a steak house with guns?
Where is the poetry in your mouth?

有时庖丁解牛，有时一枪结束。
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Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

星子 · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 2:17 pm 发表主题:

有时庖丁解牛，有时一枪结束。

看兴趣和对不对口味-----呢
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Lake · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 6:03 pm 发表主题:

閒騷一頭乱髮
偶吟一兩聲平仄
時展三兩聲歌喉
平也仄仄也平
仄仄復平平
平平復仄仄
忐忐忑忑

庖丁解牛
一枪结束
不乏平和仄