酷我-北美枫

星子 · 发表于: 星期四十月 19, 2006 2:38 pm 发表主题: Snow (haiku)

看江南雪景有感

Snow

The silent night sets
a white quilt slip into fields
blesses a new day

(2)

dandelions settle
with a vow of peaceful world
beckon white snow's dream
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kokho · 发表于: 星期四十一月 02, 2006 11:24 am 发表主题:

第二个　好！

a white quilt slipping fields 　６个音节？

。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

星子 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 02, 2006 1:29 pm 发表主题:

Ko KoH You are right.

I need to change...

The silent night sets
a white quilt slip into fields
blesses a new day

Thanks
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kokho · 发表于: 星期四十一月 02, 2006 3:25 pm 发表主题:

改得好　：））

Ｔｈｅ　ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇ　ｃｏｎｖｅｙｅｄ　ｉｓ　ｅｘｃｅｌｅｎｔ．
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星子 · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 12:22 pm 发表主题:

Thanks Kokho!

How is your trip?

How about the reading poem session?
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kokho · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 12:51 pm 发表主题:

It was fun, we have music, photo and billingual poetry Smile

Australian, Chinese, Egyptians, American...

Wine, beer, juices and munchies...

Plenty of laughters, jokes and stories.

Only that my camera with all the pics was stolen 3 days later ;(

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星子 · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 1:03 pm 发表主题:

too bad to hear you lost your camera.

But anyway Now I learn to let go. You too?
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博弈 · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 1:47 pm 发表主题:

一下子热闹了，我也来发一个调皮双语诗。。。
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Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

星子 · 发表于: 星期二十一月 21, 2006 1:54 pm 发表主题: