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奏墨涂鸦,3,4 首吧

 
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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来自: San Francisco

帖子发表于: 星期六 十月 28, 2006 10:49 pm    发表主题: 奏墨涂鸦,3,4 首吧 引用并回复

奏墨涂鸦,3,4 首吧


“If I touched you I
should
be able to feel you but I
didn’t … … 

I read a rose I’m yes I am
with the flower and it’s in me
I carry the flower to my sheet
‘n plant it in my bed of poetry
Now I am with my po--em
and the po--em is in me
I send it out to you
-- the flower in a garden
 made of words words
 wrapped by the sheet

You open it
      touch it

Do you feel  I feel
Do I feel y--o-u feel
A poem has opened“

 But, I never entered the rose
I was in the garden If I Touch.


《如果我触摸到你 我
就应
感觉到你 但我
没有。。。 。。。

我凝视一朵玫瑰我 是的 我与
这花儿在一起 它在我心中
我把花儿带到我的纸页
种在诗的温床里
我与她言志
她在我心中
将诗寄给你
——那一朵园中的花
  有字词簇拥
  用床单紧包

你打开它
    爱抚它

你可感到了 我感到 
我感到你 感到了 
诗打开了》

  然而,我没进入玫瑰
我在一个“如果我感触“的花园.



--Declaration of Independence by Words--

On the way home from a country circus
A raccoon was gunned down at the cross-road
One side was storming out cocooned bullets
You, puzzled at the sight, hesi-
tated to move, eyes revealing alien wavelength
as if
you have just landed this wordy earth.
You were totally naked
To cross or not to cross… ….

I stepped out and you told me …
You’d been abused in a wrong marriage
You’d been cheated at the speaker’s platform, under the desk
You’d been tossed around by love and domestic violence
Some howl your names as hookers (who isn’t aesthetic?)
Some want to hear you sing with artistic vocals
Some give you icons to finger play your hats
Get to the heart or get to the truth, damn it
Some rape you over and over and who is more addictive
Some pull your hearts out ‘n want to dissect you as a Beijing duck
Yet, you hang in there for
  Ask not what this country has done for you
  Ask what you have done for this circus

Jesus was the first word you heard when you came out of tunnel Maria
Before the cross-road. Disoriented, anagrammed, neutralized.
Asked to be silent if don’t like to listen, the Matrix Sign
Here come dots: The Morse Code -- Desperation (A Rope Ends It)

Before doing that, you strip yourself (not breaking the laws endorsed by you)
cut your vocal cord, shrug off comrades, shoes off, no more abuse or any
hats, and say: Just look at me—bald naked performing art.

Give it back to me, simply words!


--Egg vs. Banana--

Ebony and ivory
Some sing it
Some play it
Don’t give me that shit

Boiled eggs in salad bar
Slices, yellow in white
Mixes, such a delight
Banana? Confucius never tried

A Chauvinist knight once I
Womanizingly obliging was
Take away my fork and knife
Or I shall know you inside
_________________
Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...
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三品按察使
(天,你是斑竹吧?)
三品按察使<BR>(天,你是斑竹吧?)


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来自: Singapore

帖子发表于: 星期日 十月 29, 2006 11:29 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

喜欢第三首 

It's like the low-brows works
of London.
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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酷我!I made it!
酷我!I made it!


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来自: Toronto

帖子发表于: 星期日 十月 29, 2006 12:23 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

I like the last two.

the first one, too logic for me.
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


注册时间: 2006-09-24
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来自: San Francisco

帖子发表于: 星期日 十月 29, 2006 12:52 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

if you like anagram (making new words from re-arranging order of letters), these were included for fun, and suit well I think..

silent -> listen
Here come dots -> The Morse Code
Desperation -> A Rope Ends It
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Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...
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