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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期一 十月 23, 2006 3:32 pm 发表主题: 不错 Not Bad |
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不错 Not Bad
like “what is this dong dong 东东” was
used to prevail the internet language
‘not bad’ or 不错 becomes fashionable
as a comment to a post
economical, convenient, and neutral
no reason commenters not love
using it. ‘not bad’ to a novice
‘not bad’ to someone with
a few years of experience
‘not bad’ to a prestigious poet
does it carry the same implication
at all times, in all circumstances?
is it of praise, encouragement
or just ‘ok’ or ‘not good enough’?
WHAT is not bad? its content,
language, form, idea, subject… ?
Oh, what a beauty of the language!
anyway, I find it so easy to use
and am inclining to use it. but
not bad, not bad, not bad…
‘not bad’ drives me nuts
10/23/2006
(Roughly written out of an impulse. It is just me, no offence to anyone who uses it.)
最后进行编辑的是 Lake on 星期三 十月 25, 2006 8:13 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期一 十月 23, 2006 8:42 pm 发表主题: |
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A Joke
So this is what poetry, this dong-dong is about
I can’t comment on your poem as not bad, but
I think boo-grass is close to how I feel
A little excitement in life mostly don’t kill
Depends how I get it
It could be not bad at all
It could be not bad after all
It could not not bad, but BAD
And then what do you expect
From this shrewd, dirty old pen
Anyhow, if you find it easy to use
And intend to use it, remember
Though it ain’t killing
It is hell as addictive as a ghost
Frequenting a house with a puff _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期二 十月 24, 2006 12:06 pm 发表主题: |
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博弈 写到: |
I can’t comment on your poem as not bad, but
I think boo-grass is close to how I feel
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Glad I did not receive 'not bad' comment. But you get me hooked on 'boo-grass'. Never heard about it before. Would you explain? Drug or.... ?
Thans for the response, 博弈. |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期二 十月 24, 2006 12:25 pm 发表主题: |
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Lake 写到: | 博弈 写到: |
I can’t comment on your poem as not bad, but
I think boo-grass is close to how I feel
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Glad I did not receive 'not bad' comment. But you get me hooked on 'boo-grass'. Never heard about it before. Would you explain? Drug or.... ?
Thans for the response, 博弈. |
tried to make a word out of 不错,I came up with boo-grass(不草)casually, it means marijuana, usually used to induce euphoria.
just a joke, I never used it. _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期二 十月 24, 2006 11:01 pm 发表主题: |
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谢谢星子提供的 info.
But this is just an inspiration out of my observation, no intention to do anything with it. I normally don't write stuff like that. I can't believe it was scribbled down in such short time.
Thanks for reading. |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期二 十月 24, 2006 11:22 pm 发表主题: |
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引用: | tried to make a word out of 不错,I came up with boo-grass(不草)casually, it means marijuana, usually used to induce euphoria. |
Thank you 博弈 for your explanation. Ha, you are doing wordplay here.
引用: | just a joke, I never used it. |
Don't never ever 'use it'.
引用: | Depends how I get it
It could be not bad at all
It could be not bad after all
It could be not bad, but BAD |
Nod... |
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不清[不清] 不清作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-03-22 帖子: 1364
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发表于: 星期二 十月 24, 2006 11:55 pm 发表主题: |
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Lake and 博弈, you guys are NOT BAD!
i like both _________________ 「四十二排浪,沒有一排是相似的」——不清
博客:
http://42waves.tumblr.com |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期三 十月 25, 2006 11:09 am 发表主题: |
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不清 写到: | Lake and 博弈, you guys are NOT BAD!
i like both |
Thanks 不清 for your NOT BAD! I take it as how I get it. |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期三 十月 25, 2006 11:14 am 发表主题: |
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不清 写到: | Lake and 博弈, you guys are NOT BAD!
i like both |
i know mine was bad, thanks for
notting it. ? anyway. u know. _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期四 十月 26, 2006 11:17 am 发表主题: |
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博弈 写到: |
Anyhow, if you find it easy to use
And intend to use it, remember
Though it ain’t killing
It is hell as addictive as a ghost
Frequenting a house with a puff |
Halloween is around the corner. |
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