酷我-北美枫

涌流

我七岁的女儿，刚刚花了半小时，埋头在她自己做的小册子上，写了段故事，还配了不少画。差点把我笑死 Smile

贴出来一乐

看题目吓了我一跳，还好不是她自己要嫁给nuts:)

The day I married a nut

Once upon a time, there was a squill (squirrel) who found a nut. She loved that nut so much she wanted to marry it. So she had a date with the nut. Oh she loved that nut! She wounldent (wouldn’t) do any thing without it.
One morning she and her nut were having a wedding. She gatherd (gathered) all her stuffed animals. The nut gathred (gathered) all the nuts he could find. They had the best wedding ever! They ate the wedding cake! They opened the presents and they had a sipprise (surprise) for their parents. They had twin babys (babies)! One was a boy and one was a girl! And they lived happiely (happily) ever after!

The end

括号中为我为她改的错字。

維子 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 03, 2005 12:54 am 发表主题:

天真可愛的童年...Well done...
Regards...
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來自大洋彼岸，夢境的昇華便成了詩。。。

涌流 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 03, 2005 2:51 am 发表主题:

Blue Ice · 发表于: 星期四十一月 03, 2005 9:41 am 发表主题:

HOW LOVELY GIRL
Very Happy

星子 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 03, 2005 10:43 am 发表主题:

Once upon there was a girl she marride a nut...

very navie and cute....
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涌流 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 03, 2005 9:51 pm 发表主题:

代小女谢谢阿姨夸奖

和平岛 · 发表于: 星期五十一月 04, 2005 1:46 am 发表主题:

真不错！谢谢

broadstroke

What I like about this little story is that it is simple. Sometimes the most beautiful things in life are the most simple.

Now whenever I'm walking through the park and see squirrels, I'll be reminded of the day you married a nut!

Blue Ice · 发表于: 星期六十一月 12, 2005 3:13 pm 发表主题:

do you know the writer is a little girl(only 7 years old)

朱新魁 · 发表于: 星期六十一月 12, 2005 10:58 pm 发表主题:

天真可愛的童年

秋叶

涌流兄，小作构思严谨，文笔简练，令嫒很有天份，未来的作家！

肖今 · 发表于: 星期日十一月 13, 2005 8:35 am 发表主题:

哈，看来我得向这位小姑娘学习了：）

呵呵，优秀遗传基因：）
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░░破茧成蝶眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

涌流 · 发表于: 星期日十一月 13, 2005 10:25 am 发表主题:

渟渟谢谢叔叔阿姨阅读、夸奖。