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		和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集  一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
  
 
  注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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				 发表于: 星期一 十月 31, 2005 8:59 am    发表主题: Life | 
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				It doesn't matter
 
if life is defected
 
Burden will only get released
 
when you dance with the wind
 
or fly over the ocean
 
 
With waves, you know
 
We are just pass-bys
 
Even if we meet
 
face-to-face with each other
 
 
It doesn't matter
 
even if life is defected
 
You will eventually realize
 
you are a particle of the sun
 
when you cannot feel the heat
 
 
 
2005-10-31
 
Victoria, Canada
  最后进行编辑的是 和平岛 on 星期二 十一月 01, 2005 11:54 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑 | 
			 
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		肖今[King] 肖今作品集  一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
  
  
  注册时间: 2004-06-16 帖子: 5783 来自: Free sky
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				 发表于: 星期一 十月 31, 2005 12:24 pm    发表主题:  | 
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				励志的诗篇,好! _________________ ░░破茧成蝶  眼泪,从此不咸░░ 
 
 
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		肖今[King] 肖今作品集  一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
  
  
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				 发表于: 星期一 十月 31, 2005 12:25 pm    发表主题:  | 
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				you are actually a particle of the sun 
 
when you cannot feel the heat _________________ ░░破茧成蝶  眼泪,从此不咸░░ 
 
 
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		星子[ANNA] 星子作品集  酷我!I made it!
  
  
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				 发表于: 星期一 十月 31, 2005 11:28 pm    发表主题:  | 
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				defected change to imperfect? _________________
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		和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集  一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
  
 
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				 发表于: 星期二 十一月 01, 2005 12:19 am    发表主题:  | 
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				 	  | 星子 写到: | 	 		  | defected change to imperfect? | 	  
 
 
These two words have different meanings, with the former one being an action, and the latter one being a status.
 
 
An action means something like an accident or a mistake, which causes a change of direction in your life,  or causes regrests.
 
 
And then you have the status of being imperfect.
 
 
In my specific case, I want to express an accidential event. | 
			 
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