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星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

Watch my son play soccer

In the sunset,
he dashes to his goal,
yells back his joy.

His smile so sunny,
yet I just jot down another sad poem,
he returns and calls,
"Mom, Watch and rest!".
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三六月 21, 2006 8:23 pm 发表主题:

Dilemma

My friend, the scientist and poet,
was back from Africa,
remembers his trip to the prison
where Nelson Mandella was kept for 25 years.

He steps forward,
yet sighes,
Somewhere in someone's heart,
a prisoner I will die for.
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长篙 · 发表于: 星期四六月 22, 2006 12:24 am 发表主题:

星子的家好幸福.嘿嘿...俺用的金山快译.有误解,很大.
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叶雨 · 发表于: 星期四六月 22, 2006 5:37 am 发表主题:

喜欢 Dilemma 那首。鼓舞性的坚强。

星子 · 发表于: 星期四六月 22, 2006 8:24 am 发表主题:

谢谢 99。查字典是会误解的。。。

谢谢叶导---周扒皮。。。。

Dilemma 前段属实，后段是联想到的---哪天给这位朋友读读，看他如何理解，，，我们一起讨论诗歌，所以不易误解
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