酷我-北美枫

蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期日九月 25, 2005 10:16 am 发表主题: 早秋露浓

早秋露浓

<1>
叶子, 这么快就落了
地球悄悄低下头
窗外, 风在哭

<2>
月儿, 刚刚圆过?
桌面, 残存
两只杯, 一瓶酒, 你
一杯接一杯饮, 一杯
满了孤独, 一杯
空了思念

<3>
有人问诊, 你俨然
是自信的医生,
可有谁知
医生的病痛?

早秋的浓雾
弥漫难得糊涂, 天边
挂几颗
清醒的露珠

<4>
花死了. Ta说
不想见
无情的冬

门外, 还有几粒石头
那是从海边
检来的
五彩斑斓的石头

白色象征纯洁
蓝色透着冷漠
那么, 红色呢?
是血, 是火?
是太阳点燃的枫叶, 还是
早秋梦中的诗歌?

你说, 那是
魔鬼留下的罌粟

朱新魁 · 发表于: 星期日九月 25, 2005 9:27 pm 发表主题:

拜读

frankjiang · 发表于: 星期日九月 25, 2005 10:09 pm 发表主题:

是太阳点燃的枫叶, 还是
早秋梦中的诗歌?
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meriyem · 发表于: 星期一九月 26, 2005 2:28 am 发表主题:

欣赏了
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蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期一九月 26, 2005 9:50 pm 发表主题:

thank you for your kind words, 朱新魁, frankjiang and meriyem

肖今 · 发表于: 星期二九月 27, 2005 12:42 pm 发表主题:

喜欢，送你一朵玫瑰，你接受吗？

呵呵……
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蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期二九月 27, 2005 9:42 pm 发表主题:

白水 · 发表于: 星期六十月 01, 2005 9:34 pm 发表主题:

Early autumn's Dew

Leaves are falling down so quickly
The earth lowers her head
And the wind is crying at the window outside

Did the full moon just pass?
On the table, there are two glasses of wine
You, drinking them one after the other
One filled with loneliness, the other, longing

When people get sick
You are the doctor who helped them got over
But who can understand the illness inside of you

An early autumn fog spread muddily everywhere
yet a clear dewdrop hangs in the sky

The flowers was died
they don’t want to chance the ruthless winter

Beyond the doors, there are a few stones
in a myriad of colors
I picked from the beach
White is pureness
Blue is coldness
How about the red?
Are they fire?
Or blood?
Are they the burning maple leafs lit by the sun?
Or are them the early autumn's poetry in my dream?

You said
They are the opium left by devil

惠建宁 · 发表于: 星期日十月 02, 2005 12:34 am 发表主题:

我比较喜欢的诗

蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期日十月 02, 2005 10:23 am 发表主题:

thanks for liking it