酷我-北美枫

[星子]

I thought marriage as a shiny vase:
No matter how beautiful it was,
the blank part longed for a rose.
I failed to predict the fragile surface.

You taught me it was survivable as black soil.
We buried love seeds deep beneath.
Regardless of storm or snowfall,
the roots clutched faith.

I took lessons from broken pieces,
you mended it with seamless patterns.
Now, we grow our family tree,
with light soaked souls.

[[ANNA]]

I thought marriage as a shiny vase:
No matter how beautiful it was,
the blank part longed for a rose.
I failed to predict the fragile surface.

You taught me it was survivable as black soil.
We buried love seeds deep beneath.
Regardless of storm or snowfall,
the roots clutched faith.

I took lessons from broken pieces,
you mended it with seamless patterns.
Now, we grow our family tree,
with light soaked souls.

[晓鸣]

很好的联想和引申.但整首诗显得有点拘谨.

[[自己的敌人]]

很好的联想和引申.但整首诗显得有点拘谨.

[和平岛]

很经典的诗歌

[[我还没有昵称]]

很经典的诗歌

[星子]

[[ANNA]]