酷我-北美枫

星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

I paint my dream
in hue of pink
and plow the blue clay
to seed rose wreath.

I draw the sunlight
in golden
and green is
the zephyr

I paint and paint...
mumbling the very place
for myself
but only a shadow is left
in a misty morning

白水 · 发表于: 星期二四月 05, 2005 4:47 pm 发表主题:

Maybe the weather of Toronto has poroblem, I get so sick, you feel so bad.
any way, this is a good poem.

风动 · 发表于: 星期二四月 05, 2005 6:54 pm 发表主题:

' paint my dream'...... very creative!

icecanadaice · 发表于: 星期三四月 06, 2005 9:11 pm 发表主题:

colorful dream!

和平岛 · 发表于: 星期三四月 06, 2005 9:40 pm 发表主题:

paint and paint
不错的过程