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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-02-07 帖子: 103
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发表于: 星期五 三月 27, 2009 7:33 pm 发表主题: The Collateral Damage of A.I.G. |
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The Collateral Damage of A.I.G. co-written by ericcoliu (Tanka Sequence)
I
the boss reads
i await
you've one day!
from his window
the CN Tower is upside down
II
my pastor smiles
and tells me
prayers are phone calls to God
i despair
i can’t pay my bills
III
I
a buzzing fly
in the living room:
we do nothing
but chase each other
Note:
The CN Tower is located in Downtown Toronto, Ontario, Canada. It is a communications and observation tower standing 553.33 metres tall, the tallest free-standing structure in the Americas and the signature icon of Toronto's skyline. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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浴恩福[浴恩福] 浴恩福作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-05-08 帖子: 123 来自: 多倫多
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发表于: 星期六 三月 28, 2009 12:03 pm 发表主题: Re: The Collateral Damage of A.I.G. |
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hahaview 写到: |
I
a buzzing fly
in the living room:
we do nothing
but chase each other
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This tanka makes me laugh and cry at the same time. _________________ 報三恩、耕三大福田 |
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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-02-07 帖子: 103
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发表于: 星期日 三月 29, 2009 7:36 am 发表主题: Re: The Collateral Damage of A.I.G. |
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浴恩福 写到: |
This tanka makes me laugh and cry at the same time. |
Thanks for your sincere reply. This is my favorite, too. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-02-23 帖子: 214
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发表于: 星期一 三月 30, 2009 12:26 pm 发表主题: Re: The Collateral Damage of A.I.G. |
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hahaview 写到: |
II
my pastor smiles
and tells me
prayers are phone calls to God
i despair
i can’t pay my bills
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What kind of bills are we talking about here?
Interestingly humurous. _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-02-07 帖子: 103
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发表于: 星期三 四月 01, 2009 7:32 pm 发表主题: Re: The Collateral Damage of A.I.G. |
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dundas 写到: |
What kind of bills are we talking about here?
Interestingly humurous. |
Yes, they have the multilayered meanings. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2008-02-25 帖子: 304
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发表于: 星期六 四月 04, 2009 10:19 am 发表主题: |
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The way that you use capitalization is unusual: capitalized I in III while small Is in I and II. |
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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-02-07 帖子: 103
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发表于: 星期一 四月 06, 2009 8:39 pm 发表主题: |
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Thanks for your discerning eye.
It’s because the speaker feels powerless before the boss and his priest due to his diminished statue. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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