酷我-北美枫

蓝冰

The Fantasia of Spring

The sunlight is like gold
Flowers blooming in the yard
A bird stays on the tree
Sings a beautiful song
It wakes up the leaves
Spread a tree of green fishes

I am walking along a river
And the whole air struggling in soft excitements
Like a young girl hurrying in her silks
How colorful
Spring is coming in brilliant silence

I try to open my eyes
My body falls into the darkness
I quickly turnon the light
There is nothing left
Everything is gone from the dream
Look out the window
It is still winter

星子 · 发表于: 星期日三月 06, 2005 9:54 pm 发表主题:

I am walking along a river
And the whole air struggling in soft excitements
Like a young girl hurrying in her silks
How colorful
Spring is coming in brilliant silence

I try to open my eyes
My body falls into the darkness
I quickly turnon the light
There is nothing left
Look out the window
It is still winter

----In my opinion, the second stanza a little difficult to understand, though I know what you mean in Chinese.

The third stanza is a little off-line with the other images...
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和平岛 · 发表于: 星期日三月 06, 2005 10:48 pm 发表主题:

梦醒时分...

蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期日三月 06, 2005 10:49 pm 发表主题:

Thanks star. This is a dream. Changed a little, Do you think this is clear?

蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期日三月 06, 2005 10:54 pm 发表主题:

星子 · 发表于: 星期日三月 06, 2005 10:56 pm 发表主题:

How about?

Waking up from the dream
Everything is gone
Look out the window
It is still winter
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蓝冰 · 发表于: 星期日三月 06, 2005 11:03 pm 发表主题:

thanks. but i think this is deifferent feeling